David William Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Future Events Soon To Come

I could trace back in the past 
Since my disorganized mind can't handle all of the excitement 
I feel an urge to discover something new, but what's there to dig up?
I could explore a new terrain...but my mind can't keep up

I feel like traveling back in time
Perhaps I could have one more chance to change my past decisions
But it's just my imagination...soaked up in grubby grime 
The unbearable sense of impoverishment...ruins my ambitions

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Jslambert Mister Roboto November 10, 2011 at 1:21 AM YOU CAN KEEP UP! Bro...I choked on a pistol twice! NO where to go. ...GUESS WHO MIRACULOUSLY healed me? ME .....maybe with the help of the gods, God, the Devil, WHO KNOWS! All I know is I got off my sappy behind and Changed! Here is something I came up with ....A line that saved me : "WE are constant prisoners of our own mind. Fortunately, we too, are the WARDEN!" ---No body is gonna hunt you down, WHEN , not IF , but WHEN you break free ...TODAY! Do it for YOU. Nobody else will do it! David William Breidenthal April 14, 2012 at 2:04 PM Haha! :] Thanks for the encouragement. Have a superb weekend. -DWB