Future Dreams

Walking alone in forest's solitude to revive memories,
will not be helpful for a new life without sad moods and tears,
so just look forward with new faith and hope for future dreams


For Rick's Sijo contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Good Morning Gert, just stopping by to say hello and re-read your poem. Nice entry by the way a nice lift on the spirit to look forward and not backwards. Enjoyed reading your poetry this beautiful Sunday morning. Also waitin to see if you post a new one,..p..d
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July 4, 2010 at 1:01 PM
enjoyed, you must be out enjoying the fourth of July. I just picked me some squash and putin some fresh onions and spice like you said with the brussel sprouts. smells wonderful!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 10:48 PM
Nice one, Gert.
Adeite Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 11:20 AM
great pieces, this is nice yet thoughtful. keep writing friend and thanks for your comment on my work! hope to read more of you.keep your pen dancing Great you Gert!
Devonshire Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 4:17 AM
Nicely done, Gert! Sometimes we just have to put the past behind us and seek new beginnings. Love, Carolyn
A   Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 11:32 AM
enjoyed,, p.d.
George   Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Dear Gert, very thougt povking, indepth, Sijo. Itseems for every joy in live, there is equal sorrow. Great writing my friend, Lainie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Lainie
Neels Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 8:20 AM
Best of luck with the contest.. I love the message you convey with this one Gert :) WN
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 7:00 AM
Sometimes memories can be good and sometimes bad but as you say the hope of better lies ahead..Great one for the contest...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
K. Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 6:55 AM
This has such an inspiring message to it, Gert :) I'll definitely bear this in mind :) --nikko :)
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