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Futility

Futility open your eyes open them I demand it words shot across sacred boundaries aim for the heart, the living zone to take it down, you down into my ache tears useless coruscating acidangry drops squeezed out between fired lashes hot, burning across cheeks create deep channels of frustration, pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/23/2017 8:08:00 AM
Deep pain between these lines, Patricia..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/23/2017 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Jo, for seeing the depth of the pain.
Date: 11/22/2017 6:23:00 PM
Lots of emotion and passion. Well done, Patricia.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/22/2017 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 11/22/2017 4:51:00 PM
Feels like amber fiery pains starting with the heart then rising to the head. The brain and emotions trying to made it through. Making this one a fav. Great Job! Patricia ---James
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/22/2017 5:53:00 PM
Thank you James, you have it right.

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