Poet Destroyer A Poet Free verse

Futile Fragments - Linda Marie -

"Futile Fragments" ( A collaboration~ Linda-Marie P.S. sweetheart )
   

by~ LINDA MARIE *p.s. SWEETHEART

shattered to inner core emotions reside in vogue
as tattered tapestry etches death to vibrant vase
egotistical desires ejected common sense to rogue
fine ... adieu ... departure in the misty vague haze ...
fragmented fragile pieces exploded with destruction
simulation created to ebony volcanic ash
love vacated unceremoniously scans of interruption
emotions sustain tremors of immature backlash ...
enchanting charms reflecting the pain of sheer intense
to resurrect romance is a haunting dream of death
provoking passions escalate chaos ... havoc ... suspense
suffocation dwelling to captivate life's bated breath ...
bittersweet faded memories succumb to shadowed jest ...


by~ POET D:

Moshing fragments overlooked, a darker dance limitless
conventional Gothic hearings..... praising the sewer that runs 
analysis running ticking with the passion of an atomic bomb
the perceived exotic unity of this frightens world~ shadow dust
lashing out tropical grasses and utilities . . .  tampering every hell
Burning paper that represents hostile . . .  black ashes 
results of a detailed creature mourning the abyss
examination of falsification~ fragments that crawl in our inner walls
A poisonous micro-fragment is presented approaching 
objective with the exploration of breakage . . .  virus. . .  patterns 
meaning  destroying every awakening  stage in this bio world *via~ wide
Deep identification losing all Revelations, 
Laughing  fading away with the criteria formed 
must we ~ need us~ crawling in my inner walls. . .
use me ~ need me~ feed me~ critically  re-evaluate me . . . 


A Collaboration with * Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of Poetry Soup RIP

~A Poet Destroyer COLLABORATION~

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 10:59 PM beautiful **SKAT**

Nathan D. October 27, 2011 at 10:18 AM you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 27, 2011 at 5:07 PM well I still think our collab is tops PD my BFF... the emotion is undeniable and incredible.. thankxx for your expertise my BFF...luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 5:54 PM of course one of my very favorites too..oh yes...

Caryl Ramsdale July 21, 2011 at 2:19 PM It's been entertaining reading your joint creative efforts. Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown July 21, 2011 at 10:22 AM Enjoyed reading the words which flowed from your pens today P.D. and Linda-Marie. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick July 21, 2011 at 9:57 AM Especially like the line that says praising the sewer that runs...That is a thought process opener...Interesting ...Thanks for the kind review of my work..I am just being stressed out a good bit..Will soup you..Sara

Jancarl Campi July 21, 2011 at 8:27 AM You both have lots going on here. This poem reads extremely fast and has a bursting of emotions. I thank you both for reading my works, God bless, JancarlC.

Jayne Eggins July 21, 2011 at 5:39 AM I have already read this one on Linda-Maries profile ... I really like the collaboration done in this poem well done to you both and nice to read you again long time no read lol love Jayne

Cory Long July 21, 2011 at 4:05 AM this was an awesome and emotional write my friends..you guys are a great team,, Pd I sent you mine again :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 20, 2011 at 10:12 PM oh wow!! This sure is something-- wow you two definitely worked this quite well-- way to go for you two! Umm aha! pd! So I can go overboard with my lines-- I am still playing with the thoughts on mine though-- heehee hopefully I can post it within the day :D

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2011 at 10:03 PM gosh, it seems to be written by one and the same poet! You matched her really well, PD!! how are you gonna judge this one?

Judy Ball July 20, 2011 at 9:35 PM This is really a very cool and creative piece my friend however like I said before I think it may be a bit too deep for my poor little mind to fathom. I felt Linda's part was dealing with personal emotional trials while this part seems to deal with something else but I'm not quite sure how to express it. I do like it though. God Bless, JB

Don Johnson July 20, 2011 at 9:24 PM interesting choice of words, like badgers smiles n humming birds, beguiling....im smiling:) great verse babe's xo, Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 20, 2011 at 9:01 PM looking very good .. PD. my BFF ... reading like a charm .. an excellent collab..we should do again sometime..thankxx for adding flavor and spice to my words above... luv it my friend.. impressive piece ..your BFF forever ...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 20, 2011 at 8:04 PM am in awe PD my BFF .. an excellent ending.. depth and determination in these lines.. we work wonderfully well together ..yes? and an exciting composition for the competition.. thankxx luv..it is super impressive and intense..just the way I luv it.. your BFF ..in poetry too..

Poet Destroyer A July 20, 2011 at 7:48 PM sorry i could not keep the rhyme pattern Linda,, my mind took me down another road...

Poet Destroyer A July 20, 2011 at 7:47 PM ooooo! Linda, wanted to play hard ball...lol.. this was crazy for me.. i hope i pulled it off. ONE thing is for sure I had fun here. I think all i did was ramble out thoughts.. thank you LINDA this was so much fun... and crazy deep....p.d.