Futile CausePremiere Contest Winner

clocks racing madly to capture transient time ever escaping Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: Son of a Senryu Sponsor: Brahn Bailey Judged:09/13/2018 ~1st Place~ Contest: Get Your Senryu On Sponsor: Judy Konos Judged: 04/111/2015
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Date: 9/14/2018 11:43:00 AM
Time is always escaping as we seem to get older ... Where has all the time gone :) Nicely done, Sandra, congratulations on your win. Thank you again for your loving condolence. Hugs eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/14/2018 1:21:00 PM
Yes, Eve, it does go faster for sure. Thank you so much for your congratulations and uplifting comment. I have been thinking about you a lot, and I am happy about your visit today, and I hope and pray you are healing from your loss. With love and hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/13/2018 11:55:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra on your great win. You captured the essence of time beautifully.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/14/2018 1:18:00 PM
Than you so much, Subimal, for your congrats and very empathetic, uplifting comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/13/2018 6:57:00 PM
I love this. Congratulations. Beautiful senryu. You tell the truth in a very clever way.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/14/2018 1:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy, for your visit, congrats, and uplifting comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/13/2018 3:49:00 PM
Time ! We never tire of talking about its scarcity. Congrats on your gold medal win, Sandra.
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Date: 9/14/2018 1:16:00 PM
Yes, Line...it's always speeding away from us. Thanks for the congrats and much-appreciated support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/13/2018 3:40:00 PM
As you advance in years the clock seems to speed up. Congratulations Sandra. Tom
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/14/2018 1:16:00 PM
Yes, so true, Tom. Thank you so much for your congrats and support. Sandra :)
Date: 9/13/2018 3:22:00 PM
So very, very true. Congratulations on your wonderful winner.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/14/2018 1:14:00 PM
Thank you, Jesse, for your congrats and supportive comment. Sandra :)
Date: 9/13/2018 3:14:00 PM
so true!! Congrats on the big win, sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/14/2018 1:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/26/2015 5:50:00 PM
thank you for the reply
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:08:00 PM
Sandra, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/21/2015 5:30:00 PM
Thank you again, Linda, for your nice visits with your lovely comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/13/2015 10:06:00 AM
how very true, Sandra. instead of 'Clocks' 'people' also makes a nice reading. Congrats on fine win. Mohan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/15/2015 7:40:00 AM
Yes, Mohan...people/clocks - kind of together as one! Seems we are always watching that clock and times goes by too fast. Thank you for stopping by with your nice comment and congrats. Sandra
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:37:00 AM
Date: 4/12/2015 12:01:00 PM
The sands of time trickle down slowly; however we waste many of those grains! Congrats on your win, Sandra! // paul
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:37:00 AM
Yes, Mohan...people/clocks - kind of together as one! Seems we are always watching that clock and times goes by too fast. Thank you for stopping by with your nice comment and congrats. Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/14/2015 4:22:00 PM
Hi Paul, thank you so much for your comment and congrats. Yes...many do get wasted for sure! But I find the older we get the faster those grains trickle down! :) Sandra
Date: 4/11/2015 10:16:00 PM
yes, I remember this gem. Congrats, dear.
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Date: 4/11/2015 5:09:00 PM
Amazing write. Thank you for entering my contest
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/11/2015 8:27:00 PM
I really enjoyed your contest, Judy. Thank you so much. Sandra
Date: 4/11/2015 10:07:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) Hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/14/2015 4:20:00 PM
Sorry this is so late, Jan. But thank you for stopping back with your congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/10/2015 1:22:00 AM
That's so true Sandra, wonderfully put in this lovely senryu! Gl in contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/10/2015 8:34:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma, for your encouraging comment and best wishes. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2015 11:18:00 PM
This is...shall I say, timeless in it's truth and beautifully presented..love it Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/10/2015 8:33:00 PM
I really appreciate your positive comment, David. Thank you so much for stopping by. Sandra
Date: 4/9/2015 10:27:00 PM
FOR SURE, fickle futile time!!! Me likes this.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/10/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Andrea with your positive comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2015 7:35:00 PM
Time doesn't stop but would we want it to? Light & Love
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Date: 4/10/2015 8:31:00 PM
No, that's for sure...but sometimes wish it wouldn't go so fast! Our clocks do capture one second at a time and that's all. That visual intrigues me! Thanks for stopping by. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/9/2015 5:54:00 PM
The older we get, the more futile it gets...lol. Good one! BG
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Date: 4/9/2015 3:09:00 PM
Time can't be captured. Its gifts can be cherished. Thus, I cherish this beautiful thought by you Sandra H. Best of luck!:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/10/2015 8:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sulaskshana. So nice of your to stop by with your encouraging comment and best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Date: 4/9/2015 10:20:00 AM
Great Senryu good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/10/2015 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your nice comment and best wishes. Hugs, Sandra
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