Fusion

FUSION Breathtaking brook braving brazen bruises became broken Entered estuary emanating exuberance Reopened rosary resonated rhapsodic raga Together these tides tried to tackle tortuous terrains Flowed far fathoms freely fertilizing fallow frontiers! ~18th November 2016~ ~River Line - Poetry Contest~ ~ Sponsored by Rick Parise~ 5 lines; 14 syllables in each line

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/6/2017 11:06:00 AM

This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/28/2016 1:20:00 AM

This is for me the winner. Great skill how you fuse letters, lines and meaning. Congratulations, Kai

Anu Nayak
Date: 12/18/2016 1:34:00 AM

Dear Kai, thank you so much:) glad you liked my poem lines :) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/27/2016 6:52:00 PM

wonderful alliteration Anu:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anu Nayak
Date: 12/18/2016 1:33:00 AM

Dear Jan, thank you so much:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/27/2016 6:36:00 PM

Lovely imagery and great alliteration, Anu. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Anu Nayak
Date: 12/18/2016 1:32:00 AM

Dear Sandra, thank you so much:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/20/2016 7:13:00 PM

Wow! You penned this great my friend. Good luck in the contest............A.M

Anu Nayak
Date: 12/18/2016 1:31:00 AM

Dear Afolabi, thank you so much:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/18/2016 4:12:00 PM

Alliteration is an art of superb skill that you excel dearest, Anu!

Anu Nayak
Date: 12/18/2016 1:31:00 AM

Dear Demetrios my wise man, thank you:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2016 6:59:00 PM

You are in love with alliteration!! great job, Anulaxmi. I like how you try to stretch yourself!!

Anu Nayak
Date: 12/18/2016 1:29:00 AM

Dear Andrea, thank you:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)