Fusion

FUSION Breathtaking brook braving brazen bruises became broken Entered estuary emanating exuberance Reopened rosary resonated rhapsodic raga Together these tides tried to tackle tortuous terrains Flowed far fathoms freely fertilizing fallow frontiers!
~18th November 2016~ ~River Line - Poetry Contest~ ~ Sponsored by Rick Parise~ 5 lines; 14 syllables in each line
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Makama Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:06 AM
This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.
Neumann Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 1:20 AM
This is for me the winner. Great skill how you fuse letters, lines and meaning. Congratulations, Kai
Nayak Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:34 AM
Dear Kai, thank you so much:) glad you liked my poem lines :) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)
Allison Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:52 PM
wonderful alliteration Anu:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Nayak Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:33 AM
Dear Jan, thank you so much:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)
Haight Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Lovely imagery and great alliteration, Anu. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Nayak Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:32 AM
Dear Sandra, thank you so much:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)
Muideen Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 7:13 PM
Wow! You penned this great my friend. Good luck in the contest............A.M
Nayak Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:31 AM
Dear Afolabi, thank you so much:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Alliteration is an art of superb skill that you excel dearest, Anu!
Nayak Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:31 AM
Dear Demetrios my wise man, thank you:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 6:59 PM
You are in love with alliteration!! great job, Anulaxmi. I like how you try to stretch yourself!!
Nayak Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Dear Andrea, thank you:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)
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