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Fusion

FUSION

Breathtaking brook braving brazen bruises became broken
Entered estuary emanating exuberance
Reopened rosary resonated rhapsodic raga
Together these tides tried to tackle tortuous terrains
Flowed far fathoms freely fertilizing fallow frontiers!




~18th November 2016~
~River Line - Poetry Contest~ 
~ Sponsored by Rick Parise~ 
5 lines; 14 syllables in each line

Copyright © Anu Nayak | Year Posted 2016

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Funom Makama Date: 3/6/2017 11:06:00 AM This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share. Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 11/28/2016 1:20:00 AM This is for me the winner. Great skill how you fuse letters, lines and meaning. Congratulations, Kai Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 12/18/2016 1:34:00 AM Dear Kai, thank you so much:) glad you liked my poem lines :) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Jan Allison Date: 11/27/2016 6:52:00 PM wonderful alliteration Anu:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 12/18/2016 1:33:00 AM Dear Jan, thank you so much:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Sandra Haight Date: 11/27/2016 6:36:00 PM Lovely imagery and great alliteration, Anu. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 12/18/2016 1:32:00 AM Dear Sandra, thank you so much:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Afolabi Muideen Date: 11/20/2016 7:13:00 PM Wow! You penned this great my friend. Good luck in the contest............A.M Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 12/18/2016 1:31:00 AM Dear Afolabi, thank you so much:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/18/2016 4:12:00 PM Alliteration is an art of superb skill that you excel dearest, Anu! Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 12/18/2016 1:31:00 AM Dear Demetrios my wise man, thank you:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/17/2016 6:59:00 PM You are in love with alliteration!! great job, Anulaxmi. I like how you try to stretch yourself!! Login to Reply Anu Nayak Date: 12/18/2016 1:29:00 AM Dear Andrea, thank you:) glad you liked my alliteration:) I appreciate your words:) sorry for my delayed reply// love, Anu:)