Further Than the Heart Allows

beyond the sun
another moon,
and just as cold





© Kristin Reynolds 5 22 09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 24, 2012 at 6:21 AM
Kristin - So succinct and fully packed. There are so many gems in your repertoire. love, Kathy
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November 1, 2009 at 7:27 AM
A very poignant haiku, Kristin, and so very true.. the best kind of verse... thankxxx and bravo... Linda-Marie
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June 6, 2009 at 3:45 PM
True words in this Haiku Kristin, and the further away the colder>James
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May 28, 2009 at 6:56 AM
It's amazing how much meaning you have packed into this compact form... I love this line. "Just as cold". Great job!
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May 25, 2009 at 6:38 AM
Hi Kristin I goota love this! Knowing we're not alone in this universe, I sit and ponder your words with much intuitive insight. You sure do know how to spark our inspiration hun! Hope you and your family is having a good Memorial Day! Miss you. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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May 23, 2009 at 8:18 PM
. . . ne'er love to thee, kind. - is what slammed across the frontiers of my mind, as I contemplated your most excellent work; another favorite for my collection Thank-You for your most welcome comments, the gifts of heart that prod me onward. love, poet butterfly :)
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May 22, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Very poignant reminder of the coldness that awaits us as we explore our "universe," even if it is an internal one. Great write on many levels, Kristin! Love, Carolyn
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May 22, 2009 at 8:44 AM
You can pack into so few words....a whole world of meaning....
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May 22, 2009 at 8:18 AM
But different in the scheme of things Kristin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts
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May 22, 2009 at 6:26 AM
Hmm...makes me think of 'dark side of the moon'. Always so much even to a few lines of yours. So excellent. Have a beautiful weekend Kristin. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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May 22, 2009 at 4:10 AM
This is really awesome...love the title... and yes the further you venture the coldness still resides.
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