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further than the heart allows

beyond the sun
another moon,
and just as cold

© Kristin Reynolds 5 22 09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 4/24/2012 6:21:00 AM
Kristin - So succinct and fully packed. There are so many gems in your repertoire. love, Kathy
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Date: 11/1/2009 7:27:00 AM
A very poignant haiku, Kristin, and so very true.. the best kind of verse... thankxxx and bravo... Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/6/2009 3:45:00 PM
True words in this Haiku Kristin, and the further away the colder>James
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Date: 5/28/2009 6:56:00 AM
It's amazing how much meaning you have packed into this compact form... I love this line. "Just as cold". Great job!
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Date: 5/25/2009 6:38:00 AM
Hi Kristin I goota love this! Knowing we're not alone in this universe, I sit and ponder your words with much intuitive insight. You sure do know how to spark our inspiration hun! Hope you and your family is having a good Memorial Day! Miss you. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 5/23/2009 8:18:00 PM
. . . ne'er love to thee, kind. - is what slammed across the frontiers of my mind, as I contemplated your most excellent work; another favorite for my collection Thank-You for your most welcome comments, the gifts of heart that prod me onward. love, poet butterfly :)
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Date: 5/22/2009 9:08:00 AM
Very poignant reminder of the coldness that awaits us as we explore our "universe," even if it is an internal one. Great write on many levels, Kristin! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/22/2009 8:44:00 AM
You can pack into so few words....a whole world of meaning....
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Date: 5/22/2009 8:18:00 AM
But different in the scheme of things Kristin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts
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Date: 5/22/2009 6:26:00 AM
Hmm...makes me think of 'dark side of the moon'. Always so much even to a few lines of yours. So excellent. Have a beautiful weekend Kristin. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 5/22/2009 4:10:00 AM
This is really the title... and yes the further you venture the coldness still resides.
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