Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Funny Bunny With Not Alot of Money

I know this funny bunny with not alot of money,
his name is Lucky Loo and has a white tummy-
he said an Irish ferret gave him a green carrot, 
and now has good fortune and won’t even share it. 

Lucky Loo has confessed this carrot is so blessed,
little did he know this would be his greatest test-
Hoping for prosperity he played the local lottery,
he won….but walked away with only Irish pottery!




Write a Funny Poem For a 7 Year Old Contest
February 2, 2018

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Line Gauthier February 2, 2018 at 8:29 PM Very funny, Laura. Love it. Great imagery. Beautiful Scars February 3, 2018 at 9:18 AM thank you lovely Line :) -luloo

Robert Johnson February 2, 2018 at 7:24 PM My kinda poem, Totally enjoyable. :) Beautiful Scars February 3, 2018 at 9:18 AM thank you Robert ;)-luloo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 2, 2018 at 10:59 AM Adorable penning Luloo! Good luck to you in the contest :) xomo! Beautiful Scars February 3, 2018 at 9:18 AM thank you sweet lady ;)-luloo

Silent One February 2, 2018 at 6:25 AM Well you know Im gonna love this one! My bunnies are very funny, but they do not need money, they have everything they need, including me who looks after them very well lol.. Beautiful Scars February 3, 2018 at 9:35 AM oh yeah, there's nothing cuter than watching a baby bunny hop for the first time! Or dig in their hay like crazy animals. Bunnies are the best, I know you agree :) Beautiful Scars February 3, 2018 at 9:17 AM I knew you'd love it! And I used my bunny's name :) #bunniesforever lol ......Thanks SO, you rock as always -lulooo