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Funnelled Vision

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Envision if you will
how your tunnel vision
denies sharing, context and scope.
Your ambit roundabout whirls in blinkers
denies entry with right-of-way blocks
as you go round and round
spinning endlessly in the dark
on a roundabout game in the park.
Your circumspect vision funnelled 
down tunnel into your black id hole.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/28/2018 10:06:00 AM
Excellent! Well done:)
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Date: 4/16/2018 9:37:00 PM
A great poem, John. And I love how you add the audio. Awesome.
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John Anderson
Date: 4/16/2018 9:46:00 PM
I cheat and use the fromtexttospeech tool to create an MP3 file. It works very well IMO cheers

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