Funeral Pyre

Fire swiftly releases and A soul flies free on its course; The journey to afterlife, Needs no vehicles.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2019 9:19:00 AM

The soul had been gone the minute they quit breathing. Sad to think people are burned but they still are. I guess we could run out of burial ground though. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/7/2019 10:03:00 AM

Thank you, Sara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2019 5:36:00 PM

I like the word Demetrios used. This is divine!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/6/2019 10:05:00 AM

Thanks again.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/5/2019 6:05:00 AM

Divinely inspiring dearest, MLK!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/5/2019 8:41:00 AM

Thank you.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/4/2019 6:46:00 PM

I am loving this one for sure! You know this!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/4/2019 7:17:00 PM

Thanks again.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/4/2019 5:42:00 PM

So very true M.L., we come in with nothing and will float away with nothing.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/4/2019 7:17:00 PM

Thanks Tom.