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Hiya's Fireflies or Stars Contest ~ August 5, 2026

Funeral of Fireflies

Sweet scent perfumes the night air where sprites' lanterns glow Flickering fireflies are gleaming Aflutter in the meadow at the aura of dusk until the dance is over when their luminance fades and I mourn their untimely death Then, I shall sing a hymnal song, a melodious elegy to grieve them with unstifled tears as I walk the meadow tomorrow night A trail of light from my candle will keep burning bright until a proper homage to the wee fairy-like creatures has been made and solemnly paid and a wreath of wildflowers has been laid at the gate where the meadow begins
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Borg Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 12:52 PM
Dear Lin, your Fib poem is absolutely amazing. It brought back childhood memories when I daren't touch a firefly for fear of burning my fingers. A worthy top win, congratulations.
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September 13, 2026 at 5:47 PM
Oh mi gawshhh this is nothing less than pure brilliance! I'm awestruck! 😱 Reading it over again jus now left me speechless n breathless for some reason, you've such a poignant quality of words here ma dear Linzieeezz! Such a profound Fibonacci that knows the heartbeat of melancholy! I love so many things here especially the imagery, the detailed depth and these lines ~ "Aflutter in the meadow at the aura of dusk until the dance is over when their luminance " Oh how something so ethereal succumbed to demise! This makes me think Abt so many instances.. when life makes the most beautiful feelings short-lived! And their fleeting essence continues to be an ache in our hearts 🥹🫂 "a wreath of wildflowers has been laid at the gate" how stunning! And soul-stirring! Congratulations on your top placement in my contest, so well deserved ✨ sending you hugsz and love 🧚🌙💫⭐❤️‍🔥
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 10:29 AM
- I have never seen fireflies... you paint a beautiful picture, Lin :) - A wonderful poem :) - Congratulations on your top win in the contest :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 12:33 PM
I especially love "the aura of dusk" and also "unstifled tears " "wee fairy-like creatures has been made and solemnly paid with a wreath of wildflowers has been laid" soulful really! You are one fine poetess! I know this will score high! Pleasure reading linnersz. Sending you light always ~
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 12:40 PM
Merci beaucoup, mon cheri ami. Tu es une femme Tres Speciale
Empress Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 12:31 PM
Wow i absolutely love your fib linnersz, you and I are the very first to post for Hiyas contest, and we both used two different prompts, but this was my first choice actually! I love how you always paint imagery, and this one emanates the magical warmth of fireflies! I remember when I first had the privilege to see fireflies, I was left speechless in awe, that is exactly how I am right now as I read this stunning take! I love your wordplay, and also how it ends! And the softness of your alliterations
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 12:35 PM
Thank you never seems to be an adequate response to your detailed reviews, Ink. I haven't seen fireflies since I was a child. Pity that there are so few remaining somewhere in the world. I'd love to see them again. I think it's ironic that we are the first to write for Hiya and not about the same theme. Her contests, like yours always give choices that make me reach for my pen to write thoughts that always seem to hover in my mind.
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