Fun In the Tub

Fun In The Tub In the bath tub, I relax from the day. The hot water from the tap does evenly spray I put in the bubbles and froth them all up Light me some candles and get a romantic book. I slip in the bubbles and they cling everywhere All soft on my skin all waiting to share Every inch of my body all covered in bubbly froth The steam in the room if it were smoke I would cough. I lay and relax all sensuous lying in bath tub heaven. When someone shouts up the stairs “Get a move on will you, its way after seven, I want some food and a drink and I need to use the loo Unless I come up and get in with you?” My heavenly bath is over, I ascend rather quick I know what he’s after, I know every trick. I’m out and I’m dressed before he ascends the stairs “Oh I thought you were in the tub I was after your wares.” My wares are all gone covered up like a nun I’m not in the mood for any of his fun, I watch him strip off down to his smalls He slips in the baths where I have used some bath balls I scrub his back gently as he likes me too And yes you have guessed it I’m now in there too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/26/2012 5:03:00 AM
gets the imagination going...
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Date: 4/9/2012 5:37:00 PM
I hope you got clean. Kind of rushed the first one. And the second one sounded dirty. :)
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/9/2012 5:52:00 PM
You can't be dirty in the tub robert ...
Date: 3/29/2012 10:00:00 PM
hahaha. Gave into that lout, huh? this was wonderful. YOu have such a funny bone, Mandy!
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Date: 3/28/2012 11:14:00 AM
Wow...this is smashingly fun!
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Date: 3/27/2012 12:05:00 PM
nice read and lots of fun- JH
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Date: 3/26/2012 12:41:00 PM
fascinating quality tine with the self... absorbing piece, mandy!...hugggs!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/27/2012 12:47:00 AM
Oh I woud kill for some own time xx
Date: 3/25/2012 10:06:00 AM
sounds like great "alone time" with lots of fun too Mandy.. enjoyed this creative piece with wonderful rhyme.. thankxx for all your sweet comments and encouraging words to me.. I am now home from hospital ..enjoying my pets and poetry tonight..luv..
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/27/2012 12:46:00 AM
So glad you are home get well soon xx
Date: 3/25/2012 7:06:00 AM
Rub-a-dub-dub... two in the tub...Awesome light hearted poem Mandy luv xxx Hugs
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/27/2012 12:45:00 AM
Thanks Tracie, big tub morefun xx
Date: 3/25/2012 5:42:00 AM
a sufficiently titillating write for a day, jag
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/27/2012 12:44:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it jag xx
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