Russell Sivey Poet Pantoum

Fun In the Rain

There’s a young girl that delights in the rain
She wants to play, to fool around within
There’s not a better place to run again
The field that’s wet, fun’s about to begin

She wants to play, to fool around within
Nature has ways of bringing some beauty
The field that’s wet, fun’s about to begin
Nothing has more life than the rain you see

Nature has ways of bringing some beauty
As the shower allows for fun to come
Nothing has more life than the rain you see
The girl sure has a lot more fun than some

As the shower allows for fun to come
There’s not a better place to run again
The girl sure has a lot more fun than some
There’s a young girl that delights in the rain

Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2013 at 5:05 PM very cute one and nostalgic for me , childhood and rain go together so well. btw, I like your "new" avatar

Connie Gildersleeve February 11, 2013 at 12:51 PM Harkens me back to childhood, playing in the rain. It would make a great song. A song of summer rains. It sticks in my mind, your words like a rhyme. An excellent poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick February 11, 2013 at 12:36 PM Pantoums are a very nice form..Enjoyed reading this one today..I bet that girl in last night's downpour would have been cold..If this is for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Lucilla Carrillo February 11, 2013 at 6:26 AM Hi Russel; This is so nice. A girl playing in the rain. I used to like to walk in the rain, once I even took a shower in the rain - with my clothes on. It was fun. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Donna Jones February 10, 2013 at 7:49 PM It is fun to play in the rain....and this is wonderful

Debra Squyres February 10, 2013 at 6:14 PM I've looked at this form before and saw it as very challenging. You carried it out well...enjoyed !!