Fun day

the red fox frolicked across the large open field fun day on display Heidi Sands 6/22/25 (C)opyright

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/10/2025 4:19:00 AM

Love those first two lines! Great alliteration throughout, just the right touch!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2025 5:47:00 AM

Thank you very much Kim :)

Charles Messina

Date: 6/26/2025 6:24:00 PM

It wouldn't have been fun for him if I came across him with my bow (lol). Nice one, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/27/2025 6:22:00 AM

You are right. That certainly wouldn't be fun for him! Thank you for your visit :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/26/2025 6:19:00 AM

Heidi, your foxy haiku evokes such an entertaining escapade! It ticked me very much!! Happy Thursday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/26/2025 6:36:00 AM

Thank you Mike. Happy Thursday xoxo :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 6/25/2025 12:22:00 AM

My son saw a fox as a little boy while on a camping trip, funny he was just telling me about that experience from many years ago tonight! It was amazing to come across your poem just now. What a lovely sight and sweet poem!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2025 8:42:00 AM

Wow! That is interesting ! Thank you for your comment and letting me know. I hope you have a nice day :)