Cory Long Poet Tetractys

Fun At the Beach

Beach
hot, sand
Fun, smiles, sun,
Hear waves crashing,
The air is filled with smells of ocean salt
Sea gulls fly above waiting for next meal.
Star fish on rocks,
collect shells 
at the 
beach

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Mercedes Mcilhenney June 9, 2011 at 5:53 AM SO THE BEACH I LIVE 5 MILE AWAY AND LOVE ALL OF THAT I AM ALL OF WHAT EVRY BODY CLLS A BEACH BUM

Charles Henderson May 26, 2011 at 1:46 AM Cory, you covered everything but the gnats and the sweat. I like that form. Have to try me a couple. good job.

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2011 at 8:21 PM I love the beach and you gave a great summary of it!

Matt Hunt May 25, 2011 at 2:46 PM Sounds amazing! I wish there was a beach around here, but I have to travel to find any:)

Dr.Ram Mehta May 25, 2011 at 8:04 AM Lovely picture created by apt images with this double tetracys, cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 25, 2011 at 7:46 AM I am so there cory.. the beach is my home in the Summer and warm weather .. am such a beach baby my friend and u captured all the fine elements of enjoyment too..

Nick Bagnall May 25, 2011 at 5:23 AM lovely, no other comment required