Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Fun and Games With My Banana - a Poem For Darren Watson

TO FULLY UNDERSTAND THIS POEM PLEASE READ MY POEM 'HELLLPPPP I'VE LOST MY BANANA' AND DARREN WATSON'S POEM 'FUN GAMES'

Good folks of Poetry Soup you may have read of my dilemma
My Banana it went missing – it was nicked by this lovely fella
Darren invited me to join him in some fun and games
I don’t call him big boy for nothing its one of our pet names

Darren has confessed to me he stole my juicy fruit
I’d sapped all his energy he was worried I’d give him the boot
So if you don’t see us here for a while it’s down to the roll of a dice
If he wants me to play his games I won’t have to stop and think twice.


Jan Allison
15th May 2014

Poem was written after reading Darren's poem 'Fun Games' and is printed with his permission

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Rockman Pritts June 13, 2014 at 3:11 AM I must say that I'm not really sure how to take your banana poems. I do find them suspect but also enticing as well. Please correct me if I'm wrong. However, I do enjoy the imagery. Good job on both poems. Jan Allison June 13, 2014 at 3:24 AM Hi Rockman I had better explain - Darren Waston and I now write together under the name jadazzle united - we have an incredible friendship and tease each other mercilessly - our poems are all fantasy based - we have never met! hugs jan xxx Rockman Pritts June 13, 2014 at 3:16 AM Having read the following comments on this poem, let me recommend one of mine. Sweet Love. If you like that one, I have others.

Paul Callus May 18, 2014 at 1:03 PM Love your humerous side Jan! It takes the mickey out of the banana! /x/ paul Jan Allison May 18, 2014 at 1:22 PM Darren is a very naughty boy believe me Paul! Hugs as ever Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux May 16, 2014 at 3:20 PM There seems to be a bit of monkey business going on *lol* Enjoy that banana. Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 3:27 PM LOL Richard thanks for the lovely comment. We have great fun with our banter but Darren and I are simply brilliant friends and thoroughly enjoy working together as jadazzle. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Darren Watson May 15, 2014 at 10:34 PM Jan or fruity Freda as you insisted I call you in our game . You threw double six and I had to do banana tricks , lol Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 12:56 AM OMG Darren stop telling the world ALL our secrets! Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Jesus Tello May 15, 2014 at 7:30 PM lol, saw that you had made a sequel to your quest for the legendary banana, great write! Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 12:55 AM Thanks Jose for dropping by. Hugs Jan xxx

Toquyen Harrell May 15, 2014 at 5:47 PM Have fun and bring your banana :) Jan Allison May 15, 2014 at 5:56 PM Am very wary of Darren now he has an insatiable appetite and not just for bananas bless him! LOL hugs Jan xxxx

Aiyah Torres May 15, 2014 at 3:51 PM wowowowow!!! ...Hey Jan, don't be selfish girl... We ALL want to play with your game.. haha... roll the dice.. eat some banana... whatever it'll be... Can we share to your story ,let's be one big family?...OMG!!! that's gonna be a worlwide ramble show... don't like!!!! ... Great write as ever... you got me strucked.. and choked again.. (hmmmmm..) Jan Allison May 15, 2014 at 3:55 PM LOL Aiyah my missing banana and Darren's creative write were the inspiration behind this poem. Hugs as ever Jan xxx