Fun

rain is sad
Friends will shout
we are mad

 
sun come out
Under the sky
do not doubt

 
do not cry
Now be glad
a big sigh

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Nancy Kaufman

June 7, 2024 at 12:53 PM

very cute and fun Paula. Enjoyed!

Paula Goldsmith

June 8, 2024 at 8:08 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you found my "FUN" write to be very cute and fun. I loved writing this one. Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Jack Horne

June 5, 2024 at 7:18 AM

Love this definitely FUN write

Paula Goldsmith

June 5, 2024 at 11:07 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my "FUN" write. I loved writing this one. Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

May 23, 2024 at 3:00 PM

My dear Paula, this is so meaningful. Loved your piece of fun. It puts me up. Hugs my dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith

May 25, 2024 at 9:38 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you found my "FUN" write to be so meaningful &. Loved my piece of fun. It was "Fun" to bring it to life.... Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

May 23, 2024 at 9:48 AM

Dear Paula, With such eloquence, your poem encapsulates the essence of joy and simplicity in life. How you contrast rain and sun, sadness and happiness, creates quite an emotional journey for me the reader. It's to find delight in the little moments, to embrace the sunshine after the rain. Your words bring warmth and comfort, like a gentle breeze on a summer day. - Blessings, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

May 23, 2024 at 10:36 AM

Thank You for your note and for you kind words. Glad you enjoyed reading my "FUN" write. I love the summer rain/love hearing the rain sound. Oh yes, the cool gentle breeze on a hot summer day is heavenly. Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Brandy Nicole

May 22, 2024 at 2:40 PM

It's ' fun ' feeling a summer rain, especially when the sun is shining brightly. :) Your thoughts take me there, Paula. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith

May 23, 2024 at 10:33 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my "FUN" write. I love the summer rain with or without the sun. I love the rain sound. Hugs... Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Emilia James

May 22, 2024 at 1:42 PM

Have had a few good days of sun here but now the rain is back. Your poem brought the sun back out for me, thank you. Emilia :)

Paula Goldsmith

May 23, 2024 at 10:31 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my "FUN" write. I see you need the sun. I need the rain. How about I send you the sun/you send me your rain??? Hahah!!! If only we could.... Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Paul Bell

May 22, 2024 at 6:25 AM

We need more sun. I'm looking like Casper the friendly ghost.

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2024 at 9:47 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my "FUN" write. Did you know, the sun turns Casper tan??? Hahaha!!! After the winter everyone can use some sun/tan..... Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Victor Buhagiar

May 21, 2024 at 10:47 PM

Wonderful. Great entry for the contest. Best wishes.

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2024 at 9:43 AM

Thank You for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found my "FUN" write to be Wonderful. It was "Fun" to bring it to life.... Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2024 at 4:25 PM

Cute one. I love fun. It should be my middle name

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2024 at 9:41 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you found my "FUN" write to be a Cute one. Yes, you do love fun. I thought it was your middle name. Hahaha!!! Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Hilda Greenhough

May 21, 2024 at 3:36 PM

Rain gone, weather nice, a lovely poem. I liked the way you spelled fun in the rhyme.

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2024 at 9:39 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my "FUN" rhyme write. Yes, rain now gone & we can play again. Hooray!!! Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away..................

Joseph May

May 21, 2024 at 4:01 AM

I enjoyed this lovely verse Paula, best wishes

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2024 at 9:36 AM

Thank You for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found my "FUN" write to be a lovely verse. It was fun to bring it to life.... Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 21, 2024 at 2:54 AM

- Fun, best wishes in the contest Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2024 at 9:33 AM

Thank You for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed reading my "FUN" write. Good to see you back writing. Hugs... Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Gershon Wolf

May 20, 2024 at 9:06 PM

I find this to be a wonderful acrostic, Paula. ~ Just sayin,' gw

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2024 at 9:31 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you found my "FUN" write to be wonderful. I enjoyed bringing this one to life.... Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Kim Rodrigues

May 20, 2024 at 1:42 PM

Interesting write serving us up a range of emotions!

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2024 at 9:27 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you found my "FUN" write to be an Interesting write. I enjoyed writing this "FUN" write for a contest. It did take extra time/thought. Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Joseph P. DiMino

May 20, 2024 at 9:35 AM

As a Soloist, I also love harmony. God's vast nature, when at its best, is harmony. Love your write. I try to go with the flow. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2024 at 9:25 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you love my "FUN" write. WOW, a soloist & a writer. You are double blessed. Have A Fun/Great Day Writing Away...................

Paula Goldsmith

May 20, 2024 at 9:01 AM

Fun~Date Written: 5/20/2024

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