Fun

Sunshine silver through the leaves
The sweet sour taste
Of sun-ripened grapes
Norwest warmth
Playfully blowing
Laughter of adults satisfied after
The harvest
Sweet juicy pears
And a gentle warm autumn wind
And a gentle warm autumn sun

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Yolanda Joy Nicholsen

Date: 8/25/2022 3:32:00 AM

Beautiful write I adore Autumn thanks for sharing

David Smith

Date: 3/15/2022 2:40:00 AM

Perfect length for me. I Love Autumn. Such a wonderful backdrop of dappled leaves and the sun not too hot with enough rays left to bring out all the various tones in a leaf. This poem shows your versatility. Will look out for future poems. David In Wainui.

Lynn D.

Date: 2/19/2022 8:02:00 AM

Good poem! I would expand on it though.