Fume-Ing Mad

There was a commotion in the church pews
Town drunk had opened a bottle of booze
   All the congregants stared
   The town drunk wasn't scared
Belched and said, "Wait 'till I take off my shoes!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:19 PM
LOL, I love this it reminds of when I go to church drunk!
Wolf Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Is there any other way to go?! LOL. Cheers, Bobby. ~ gw
Krutsinger Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:07 PM
Oh my GW. I can see it.
Wolf Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:55 PM
This is definitely one of my 'visual poems.' LOL. Thanks, Caren. Cheers, Gershon
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:59 PM
ha. That was so silly that it was funny!! thanks for your comment on my poem, but I find no courage in admitting my fears. I do it all the time!! I guess, if anything, I am guilty of TMI!!
Wolf Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:07 PM
It was totally silly, wasn't it?! Thanks for putting up with such goofiness. I had 'Otis,' the town drunk on the old 'Andy Griffith' show in mind with this one... And I still maintain that you 'got guts!' Cheers, Andrea. ~ gw
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