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Seduced by the selective solitudes...I pick one
I chose the 100th... amongst the sacrificial setting sun
Frost filled frozen forests...forever frowning
As my breath spreads thru the vastness...forever drowning

Tic toc tic toc...my thoughts trapped in an elliptical time
100 years of solitude... panegyrical punishment for my crime

What am I guilty of?...daring to...Love!


TITLES OF NOVELS - Poetry Contest
By nette onclaud
One Hundred Years Of Solitude ( Gabriel Marquez Garcia)
June.10.2016

My form...a mixture of alliteration, rhyme and free verse.
Rhyme scheme aabb,cc,...d

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Gerald Kithinji

Date: 8/6/2016 2:28:00 PM

I dare not say.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/16/2016 11:03:00 AM

What an excellent write. Good luck in the contest.............A.M.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/16/2016 4:43:00 PM

Thank you my friend Afolabi...god bless...^WW^

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2016 5:17:00 PM

I would say that this is quite a unique take on this title contest, Wx2. I like it! Congratulations on this fine win. ~ Regards // paul

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/15/2016 6:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul...I try to write with a different point of view...sometimes way out of the box...eventually I'm in no mans land lol...god bless...^WW^

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/15/2016 1:05:00 AM

Excellent write. I like it. Thanks for sharing it. Congrats.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/15/2016 8:17:00 AM

Thank you dear Ravi...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2016 3:10:00 PM

one of the best for imagery in this contest. Congrats for being on the winner list.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/14/2016 5:41:00 PM

Thank you dear Andrea...god bless...^WW^

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/14/2016 4:57:00 AM

Hi WW. Congrats for your WIN in the contest, with this fine piece!! ;-)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/14/2016 5:49:00 AM

Thank you Teddy...god bless...^WW^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2016 4:05:00 AM

other than 'tic toc', this is an exceptional piece, WW... thanks for being part of my contest and huge congrats!..huggs

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/14/2016 5:48:00 AM

Thank you nette...I'm a little ticktock'd off though for placing last LOL...god bless...^WW^

Becca Teagan

Date: 6/13/2016 4:04:00 AM

Very nice!! I see it got POTD, congratulations!

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/13/2016 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Becca...for stopping in and kind comment...god bless...^WW^

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/13/2016 12:44:00 AM

Very nice .... congratulations

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/15/2016 12:27:00 AM

You too

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/13/2016 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Pashang...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/12/2016 7:32:00 PM

WW, what a great poem! Congratulations on having it featured as POTD! #7 ; )

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/12/2016 11:17:00 PM

Thank you dear Connie...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2016 3:10:00 PM

dropping back to offer my congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/12/2016 11:16:00 PM

Thanks so much Jan...welcome back...^WW^

James Inman

Date: 6/12/2016 9:27:00 AM

Wonderful write WW.

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/12/2016 11:15:00 PM

Thank you very much James...god bless...^WW^

Unknown Person

Date: 6/12/2016 8:43:00 AM

WOOH... "frost filled frozen forests...forever frowning"..this line is beautiful...awesome ...

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/12/2016 11:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Lekhika...^WW^

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/12/2016 7:19:00 AM

How sweet! Congrats on being chosen as POTD. :) Love does bring reward and sometimes punishment...but is it worth it? Your poem gives a resounding yes. :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/12/2016 11:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Eileen...^WW^