Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

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Seduced by the selective solitudes...I pick one
I chose the 100th... amongst the sacrificial setting sun
Frost filled frozen forests...forever frowning
As my breath spreads thru the vastness...forever drowning

Tic toc tic toc...my thoughts trapped in an elliptical time
100 years of solitude... panegyrical punishment for my crime

What am I guilty of?...daring to...Love!


TITLES OF NOVELS - Poetry Contest
By nette onclaud
One Hundred Years Of Solitude ( Gabriel Marquez Garcia)
June.10.2016

My form...a mixture of alliteration, rhyme and free verse.
Rhyme scheme aabb,cc,...d

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Gerald Kithinji August 6, 2016 at 2:28 PM I dare not say.

Afolabi Muideen June 16, 2016 at 11:03 AM What an excellent write. Good luck in the contest.............A.M. Winged Warrior June 16, 2016 at 4:43 PM Thank you my friend Afolabi...god bless...^WW^

Paul Callus June 15, 2016 at 5:17 PM I would say that this is quite a unique take on this title contest, Wx2. I like it! Congratulations on this fine win. ~ Regards // paul Winged Warrior June 15, 2016 at 6:53 PM Thank you so much Paul...I try to write with a different point of view...sometimes way out of the box...eventually I'm in no mans land lol...god bless...^WW^

Ravi Sathasivam June 15, 2016 at 1:05 AM Excellent write. I like it. Thanks for sharing it. Congrats. Winged Warrior June 15, 2016 at 8:17 AM Thank you dear Ravi...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2016 at 3:10 PM one of the best for imagery in this contest. Congrats for being on the winner list. Winged Warrior June 14, 2016 at 5:41 PM Thank you dear Andrea...god bless...^WW^

Teddy Kimathi June 14, 2016 at 4:57 AM Hi WW. Congrats for your WIN in the contest, with this fine piece!! ;-) Winged Warrior June 14, 2016 at 5:49 AM Thank you Teddy...god bless...^WW^

Nette Onclaud June 14, 2016 at 4:05 AM other than 'tic toc', this is an exceptional piece, WW... thanks for being part of my contest and huge congrats!..huggs Winged Warrior June 14, 2016 at 5:48 AM Thank you nette...I'm a little ticktock'd off though for placing last LOL...god bless...^WW^

Becca Teagan June 13, 2016 at 4:04 AM Very nice!! I see it got POTD, congratulations! Winged Warrior June 13, 2016 at 11:09 AM Thank you Becca...for stopping in and kind comment...god bless...^WW^

Pashang Salehi June 13, 2016 at 12:44 AM Very nice .... congratulations Pashang Salehi June 15, 2016 at 12:27 AM You too Winged Warrior June 13, 2016 at 11:06 AM Thank you Pashang...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong June 12, 2016 at 7:32 PM WW, what a great poem! Congratulations on having it featured as POTD! #7 ; ) Winged Warrior June 12, 2016 at 11:17 PM Thank you dear Connie...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison June 12, 2016 at 3:10 PM dropping back to offer my congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Winged Warrior June 12, 2016 at 11:16 PM Thanks so much Jan...welcome back...^WW^

James Inman June 12, 2016 at 9:27 AM Wonderful write WW. Winged Warrior June 12, 2016 at 11:15 PM Thank you very much James...god bless...^WW^

Unknown Person June 12, 2016 at 8:43 AM WOOH... "frost filled frozen forests...forever frowning"..this line is beautiful...awesome ... Winged Warrior June 12, 2016 at 11:15 PM Thank you so much Lekhika...^WW^

Eileen Manassian June 12, 2016 at 7:19 AM How sweet! Congrats on being chosen as POTD. :) Love does bring reward and sometimes punishment...but is it worth it? Your poem gives a resounding yes. :) Winged Warrior June 12, 2016 at 11:13 PM Thank you so much Eileen...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2016 at 6:46 AM - CONGRATULATIONS well deserved, P.O.T.D. :) - hugs :) Winged Warrior June 12, 2016 at 11:12 PM Thank you Anne-Lise...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2016 at 7:06 PM a very interesting approach to the contest with the eclectic mix of styles. I really enjoyed your imagery and that beautiful picture as well. Winged Warrior June 12, 2016 at 11:11 PM Thank you Andrea...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 1:23 PM - Excellent mix poem W.W. :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Winged Warrior June 11, 2016 at 3:17 PM Thank you Anne-Lise...your "Sunshine Smile"...is a winner for me...god bless...^WW^ Winged Warrior June 11, 2016 at 1:24 PM Thank you Jan...coming from you I am honored my friend...god bless...WW

Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 1:13 PM What a wonderful write ^WW^ the imagery is fabulous and great alliteration - I REALLY like this my fave poem so far:-) hugs jan xx 7 and faves Winged Warrior June 11, 2016 at 3:15 PM Thank you Jan...coming from you I am honored my friend...god bless...WW Winged Warrior June 11, 2016 at 1:21 PM Thank you Silent...you are too kind my friend...god bless...WW

Demetrios Trifiatis June 11, 2016 at 9:11 AM Excellent dear, Winged Warrior of love! Impressive! Winged Warrior June 11, 2016 at 10:31 AM Thank you Demetrious...for your visit and kind thoughts...god bless...^WW^