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Seduced by the selective solitudes...I pick one I chose the 100th... amongst the sacrificial setting sun Frost filled frozen forests...forever frowning As my breath spreads thru the vastness...forever drowning Tic toc tic toc...my thoughts trapped in an elliptical time 100 years of solitude... panegyrical punishment for my crime What am I guilty of?...daring to...Love! TITLES OF NOVELS - Poetry Contest By nette onclaud One Hundred Years Of Solitude ( Gabriel Marquez Garcia) June.10.2016 My form...a mixture of alliteration, rhyme and free verse. Rhyme scheme aabb,cc,...d

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Date: 8/6/2016 2:28:00 PM
I dare not say.
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Date: 6/16/2016 11:03:00 AM
What an excellent write. Good luck in the contest.............A.M.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 6/16/2016 4:43:00 PM
Thank you my friend Afolabi...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/15/2016 5:17:00 PM
I would say that this is quite a unique take on this title contest, Wx2. I like it! Congratulations on this fine win. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/15/2016 6:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul...I try to write with a different point of view...sometimes way out of the box...eventually I'm in no mans land lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/15/2016 1:05:00 AM
Excellent write. I like it. Thanks for sharing it. Congrats.
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Date: 6/15/2016 8:17:00 AM
Thank you dear Ravi...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/14/2016 3:10:00 PM
one of the best for imagery in this contest. Congrats for being on the winner list.
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Date: 6/14/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thank you dear Andrea...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/14/2016 4:57:00 AM
Hi WW. Congrats for your WIN in the contest, with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/14/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Teddy...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/14/2016 4:05:00 AM
other than 'tic toc', this is an exceptional piece, WW... thanks for being part of my contest and huge congrats!..huggs
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Date: 6/14/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you nette...I'm a little ticktock'd off though for placing last LOL...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/13/2016 4:04:00 AM
Very nice!! I see it got POTD, congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Becca...for stopping in and kind comment...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/13/2016 12:44:00 AM
Very nice .... congratulations
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Date: 6/15/2016 12:27:00 AM
You too
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Pashang...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/12/2016 7:32:00 PM
WW, what a great poem! Congratulations on having it featured as POTD! #7 ; )
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thank you dear Connie...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/12/2016 3:10:00 PM
dropping back to offer my congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan...welcome back...^WW^
Date: 6/12/2016 9:27:00 AM
Wonderful write WW.
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:15:00 PM
Thank you very much James...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/12/2016 8:43:00 AM
WOOH... "frost filled frozen forests...forever frowning"..this line is beautiful...awesome ...
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Lekhika...^WW^
Date: 6/12/2016 7:19:00 AM
How sweet! Congrats on being chosen as POTD. :) Love does bring reward and sometimes punishment...but is it worth it? Your poem gives a resounding yes. :)
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Eileen...^WW^
Date: 6/12/2016 6:46:00 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS well deserved, P.O.T.D. :) - hugs :)
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...^WW^
Date: 6/11/2016 7:06:00 PM
a very interesting approach to the contest with the eclectic mix of styles. I really enjoyed your imagery and that beautiful picture as well.
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:11:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...^WW^
Date: 6/11/2016 1:23:00 PM
- Excellent mix poem W.W. :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2016 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...your "Sunshine Smile"...is a winner for me...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/11/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Jan...coming from you I am honored my friend...god bless...WW
Date: 6/11/2016 1:13:00 PM
What a wonderful write ^WW^ the imagery is fabulous and great alliteration - I REALLY like this my fave poem so far:-) hugs jan xx 7 and faves
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Date: 6/11/2016 3:15:00 PM
Thank you Jan...coming from you I am honored my friend...god bless...WW
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Date: 6/11/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thank you Silent...you are too kind my friend...god bless...WW
Date: 6/11/2016 9:11:00 AM
Excellent dear, Winged Warrior of love! Impressive!
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Date: 6/11/2016 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Demetrious...for your visit and kind thoughts...god bless...^WW^