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Fully Booked 1

grapes of wrath means to me wrath caused by drinking wine, too free wonder what wrath I was suppressing last night, wrath of a hangover is now my plight, please, don't shout my wrath is pain, wishes I had suppressed the wrath of wine. In future will just sing about wrath and dine. the form is as follows I used the word wrath in each line chose title Grapes of Wrath. penned June 10 2016

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2016 4:54:00 PM

The wrath of over-indulgence:) Wine is good, but it should be drunk in moderation, smelling....swirling....tasting...ahhhhh!! ~ Congrats on your worthy win, Seren. // paul

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/15/2016 9:04:00 PM

As if I would over indulge how can you think that of me. Lol......it must be dry white though.......Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2016 3:07:00 PM

oh, that is kind of like what a sestina does. It repeats words in different lines. I enjoyed what you did with your new poetry form, and congrats for your win

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/15/2016 9:01:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I just couldn't think of anything elaborate lol....Seren

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2016 4:00:00 AM

i didn't think of that concept where a word is used in every line... well scribed, scribed, seren..thanks for being part of my contest and big congrats!..huggs

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/15/2016 8:59:00 PM

Hi Nette thanks for p!acing my effort........Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2016 6:38:00 AM

Well written Seren - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/12/2016 4:48:00 AM

Thanks Jan....Seren