Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

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grapes of  wrath means to me
wrath caused by drinking wine, too free 
wonder what wrath I was suppressing last night,
wrath of a hangover is now my plight,
please, don't shout my wrath is pain,
wishes I had suppressed the wrath of wine.
In future will just sing about wrath and dine.


the form is as follows
I used the word wrath in each line

chose title Grapes of Wrath.

penned June 10 2016

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Paul Callus June 15, 2016 at 4:54 PM The wrath of over-indulgence:) Wine is good, but it should be drunk in moderation, smelling....swirling....tasting...ahhhhh!! ~ Congrats on your worthy win, Seren. // paul Seren Roberts June 15, 2016 at 9:04 PM As if I would over indulge how can you think that of me. Lol......it must be dry white though.......Seren

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2016 at 3:07 PM oh, that is kind of like what a sestina does. It repeats words in different lines. I enjoyed what you did with your new poetry form, and congrats for your win Seren Roberts June 15, 2016 at 9:01 PM Thanks Andrea I just couldn't think of anything elaborate lol....Seren

Nette Onclaud June 14, 2016 at 4:00 AM i didn't think of that concept where a word is used in every line... well scribed, scribed, seren..thanks for being part of my contest and big congrats!..huggs Seren Roberts June 15, 2016 at 8:59 PM Hi Nette thanks for p!acing my effort........Seren

Jan Allison June 10, 2016 at 6:38 AM Well written Seren - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Seren Roberts June 12, 2016 at 4:48 AM Thanks Jan....Seren