Fullness in Emptiness

Fullness in Emptiness 5-4-26
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Fullness in Emptiness

Emptiness clothed in humility
Hears the flowing invitation
Hollow space tires of frost's futility
A parched field begs for implantation.

Vines awake filling this empty space
As springtime dances through her arbors
Sweet grape clusters quivering, with grace,
Hear the earth's song in their snug harbor.

Roots nourished by warm rains understand
The vibrant language of the rich soil
A vineyard grows into the heart's land
Blessed by the summer's essential oil.

Soil and vine entwine in sweetest bliss
When autumn leaves their wine with a kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 8:07 PM
a fav!! LOVE it
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 11:58 PM
This is very beautiful and I felt a few different thought, contemplation's with this!
Poet Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 4:45 PM
Dear Sam, your poem achieves a high level of quality through its well-structured narrative and use of poetic devices. It is engaging and enjoyable to read. My very best wishes for the contest.
Reese Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 4:28 PM
A very nicely written poem for the contest not sure I would call it a sonnet
Kauffman Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 10:07 PM
Hi Charles. Nice to meet you. Thank you for your feedback and for reading. Also grateful for your keen eye when looking at this poem. Have made some corrections. Hope all is well.
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