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Contest : Fullness In Emptiness

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Date posted : April 30, 2026

Fullness In Emptiness


Line of inquiry:
“as both this form and boundless space
cravings of ego negated
awake, vibrant yet nonchalant 
bliss drenched heart remains elated”


Moral conscience drained in channel of time
drives cognitive righteous urges to vent
in the surge of desires loaded with grime 
through the emptiness of vain discernment.

In the vacuity of inner space
the pulse of time vibrates with vanity, 
matching with the rhythm of conceited pace 
with intonation of eternity.

With timely dawn of divine awareness
the wrong cravings of ego get undone. 
Pious perception fills empty recess, 
illumined sated soul shines like the sun.

Enlightened detached in hollow abyss
life enters sanctum of fulfilling bliss.
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:22 AM
the wrong cravings of ego get undone…we must overcome our ego to find peace. Congrats, Subimal!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 8:58 AM
Yes, we must overcome our ego. Thank you, Kim.
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