Full Or Empty

Full or empty is your heart?
Can you feel this piece of art?
Can you hear the World’s loud praying?
Do we know the part we’re playing?

Wide or narrow path you walk?
Can you feel this air from smoke?
Close your eyes and feel the silent,
Feel soul’s scream, which is so violent.

Wet or dry your eyes in grief?
Can you feel this strong belief?
Hear the wind’s song in the noise?
Feel the love and make right choice?

Light or dark the way you chose?
Feel the pain from thorns of rose, 
Save the Nature, save the Earth,
Feel the beauties of Universe.

10.08.2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 7, 2014 at 11:37 PM
WOW! Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 7:36 AM
This confusion will remain until Jesus comes again and then all things will be made right. I personally liked the contrasts within your poem, it provides food for thought. Well done.
Mirzoev Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Thanks a lot Richard)))
Mirzoev Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 7:39 AM
Thanks a lot for your honest comment to my poem), you are partly right with the expression "soul's scream", everybody understands it differently, as for me this is just flow of Inspiration). Nevertheless I aprecciate your point of view. - Alisher)))
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