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Full Moon Waltz

A simple spot of tree lined wish on painted skies which now perform unfolding evening’s majesty in balanced view of moments born ~for lonely hearts a foot path makes in vision’s quest and sonnet breaks~ Beneath these branches born of leaves and cedar scents to fill the mind to cast a glance of northern flow awaiting this which we do find ~a watch face offers in its stare, a different look yet time to share~ How bright this crown does now appear above the rim of lost regrets igniting lover’s wakened hopes beyond the shadowed silhouettes ~anticipation breathes in flight, awash in this sweet glow tonight~ For on this breeze, illumined love of lighted bloomed chrysanthemum enchanted kisses destined flow on moonbeam highways formed as one ~so listen close to feelings meant and hear these words of love now sent~ As on this night a light does see as two hearts dance the evening’s show reaching for that full moon waltz before our eyes, melodic glow ~as I now whisper this to you, forever will my heart be true~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/15/2016 4:54:00 AM
Wow, Chris! The Supermoon has you in a spell and is working so well. Another pearl my friend!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. The moon does have an effect on me, sometimes good, sometimes not so much. :)
Date: 11/14/2016 4:19:00 PM
Another beautiful poem, Chris. "above the rim of lost regrets" That line really spoke to me.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 5:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Christy. I am happy you enjoyed this poem. I've kind of got the moon on my mind.
Date: 11/14/2016 4:16:00 PM
You are truly a gifted poet! Great poem!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 5:10:00 PM
Thank you so very much Arthur for your kind words.
Date: 11/14/2016 4:07:00 PM
Wow Chris. I did not read this one before I wrote about a dance on a Gazebo!. Supermoon will be again tonight . Like Charmaine says, to imagine the waltz. Beautifully done. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 5:10:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, yep its supermoon day. :) I am glad you liked this one. Your nice comments make my heart dance.
Date: 11/14/2016 3:44:00 PM
I'm going to see the supermoon waltzing before these two shadowed silhouettes in your verses get covered by its light .I might steal its glow away..and leave only the stars in the darkness..:) . Ofcourse Your poem is a waltz in itself illuminated by sentimental beauty..A fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 3:57:00 PM
You can steal its glow anytime you like my sweet friend. Thank you once again Charmaine, your nice comments are brighter than any moon or starts in the sky to me.
Date: 11/14/2016 2:20:00 PM
WoW! Chris, this is so beautiful and enchanting.I could lost in this lovely painting of illuminating words. I found it to be very romantic as well. I enjoyed your moon waltz. A without seven :-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 2:41:00 PM
Thanks so very much Alexis. It is moon day around here, the big full moon is tonight so gotta let those moon poems out. :) Smiling here because of your comment.

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