Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Full Moon Waltz

A simple spot of tree lined wish
on painted skies which now perform
unfolding evening’s majesty
in balanced view of moments born

~for lonely hearts a foot path makes in vision’s quest and sonnet breaks~

Beneath these branches born of leaves
and cedar scents to fill the mind
to cast a glance of northern flow
awaiting this which we do find

~a watch face offers in its stare, a different look yet time to share~

How bright this crown does now appear
above the rim of lost regrets
igniting lover’s wakened hopes
beyond the shadowed silhouettes

~anticipation breathes in flight, awash in this sweet glow tonight~

For on this breeze, illumined love
of lighted bloomed chrysanthemum
enchanted kisses destined flow
on moonbeam highways formed as one

~so listen close to feelings meant and hear these words of love now sent~

As on this night a light does see
as two hearts dance the evening’s show
reaching for that full moon waltz
before our eyes, melodic glow

~as I now whisper this to you, forever will my heart be true~

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White Wolf November 15, 2016 at 4:54 AM Wow, Chris! The Supermoon has you in a spell and is working so well. Another pearl my friend! Chris Green November 15, 2016 at 8:13 AM Thanks so much my friend. The moon does have an effect on me, sometimes good, sometimes not so much. :)

Christy Stover November 14, 2016 at 4:19 PM Another beautiful poem, Chris. "above the rim of lost regrets" That line really spoke to me. Chris Green November 14, 2016 at 5:11 PM Thanks so much Christy. I am happy you enjoyed this poem. I've kind of got the moon on my mind.

Arthur Vaso November 14, 2016 at 4:16 PM You are truly a gifted poet! Great poem! Chris Green November 14, 2016 at 5:10 PM Thank you so very much Arthur for your kind words.

Heidi Sands November 14, 2016 at 4:07 PM Wow Chris. I did not read this one before I wrote about a dance on a Gazebo!. Supermoon will be again tonight . Like Charmaine says, to imagine the waltz. Beautifully done. :) Chris Green November 14, 2016 at 5:10 PM Thanks so much Heidi, yep its supermoon day. :) I am glad you liked this one. Your nice comments make my heart dance.

Charmaine Chircop November 14, 2016 at 3:44 PM I'm going to see the supermoon waltzing before these two shadowed silhouettes in your verses get covered by its light .I might steal its glow away..and leave only the stars in the darkness..:) . Ofcourse Your poem is a waltz in itself illuminated by sentimental beauty..A fave. Chris Green November 14, 2016 at 3:57 PM You can steal its glow anytime you like my sweet friend. Thank you once again Charmaine, your nice comments are brighter than any moon or starts in the sky to me.

Alexis Y. November 14, 2016 at 2:20 PM WoW! Chris, this is so beautiful and enchanting.I could lost in this lovely painting of illuminating words. I found it to be very romantic as well. I enjoyed your moon waltz. A without seven :-) Alexis Chris Green November 14, 2016 at 2:41 PM Thanks so very much Alexis. It is moon day around here, the big full moon is tonight so gotta let those moon poems out. :) Smiling here because of your comment.