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pageantry of stars welcomes full moon arising, congos pulse in bounced rhythm for one midnight rush garlands offered for wishes… arms catching heavenly flare primal dances swerve unleashing instinct’s desire, toes swivel on burst of eve for whirlwind frolic… Moon Lady beams through tree - lights her radiance spilling charms ‘’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’ *The full moon rises this July 19 symbolizing aspirations for abundance, joy, good luck. Most cultures honor this day with rituals of dance, music, offerings. syllables checked at www.howmanysyllables.com ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Entered in Compose A Choka Contest 7/21/2016 ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Resubmitted for Broken Wings I Got Zero, Nothing, Nada- 2 Challenge 8/3/2016

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Date: 8/4/2016 10:42:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:47:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the imagery and congratulations to you. Please tell me what you mean by 'congos'.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/4/2016 7:47:00 AM
PS: I love the moon too.
Date: 8/4/2016 7:33:00 AM
Beautifully written, congratulations Nette...
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Date: 8/3/2016 10:37:00 PM
Lovely poem, Nette. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 7/22/2016 8:45:00 PM
A beautiful choka Nette, all about the wonderful moon especially when it is full, love it, good luck in the contest my friend, take care........Vera
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Date: 7/22/2016 2:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery brings out the best of this choka, Nette! This week I was inspired by the full moon...perhaps we were both watching it at the same time! hugs // paul
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Date: 7/21/2016 11:15:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Nette - I wish you good luck in the contest :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2016 8:05:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely poem as well lovely picture too. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/21/2016 1:55:00 AM
Very soft and beautiful moon-theme.The imagery of this scene is impeccably done. Great share!
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