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Full Moon

blooming inside your dancing lips trace moonlight in my heart I feel your dreamy words creaming caressing sugaring sweetening ------ my closed minds Full Moon ........rising in the east ........lanterns and moon viewing ........and a cup of green tea opening inside your loving kindness reflected moonlight in my heart I sense your poetic desire seeking strumming gliding gradually ------ into my mind Full Moon .......kissing the tatami .......softly entering the residence .......lighting upon a maiden's face and her samurai tiptoeing inside your gentle warrior heart shining moonbeam in my heart I embrace your burning soul melting dissolving enchanting electrifying ------ this body of mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/28/2014 4:33:00 AM
Lily, your moon has it's gravitational pull on me.. I love it!
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 6/4/2014 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Dave for visiting. You are too kind with your generous comment ;) All the best!
Date: 5/16/2014 5:45:00 AM
I love the moon great pen Lily congrats on win hugs
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Shadow for your kind words ;)
Date: 5/15/2014 10:04:00 AM
Lily, Congratulations, on your sweet awesome poetry soup win. Love ~SKAT~
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:19:00 AM
Wow! Thanks SKAT for your encouragement ;) It was a pleasant surprise!
Date: 5/15/2014 8:40:00 AM
Very wonderful verse Lily ! Congrats on great win !
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr Upma for the encouraging words ;)
Date: 5/15/2014 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Lily
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:20:00 AM
Wow! Thanks Dr.Ram for reading and commenting ;)
Date: 5/15/2014 12:46:00 AM
Lily,. Congratulations, thank you for supporting my any poem contest # 30... Take, and enjoy your day/night... LUV ~LINDA~
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:21:00 AM
Thank you for the opportunity, Linda ;) Very kind of you!
Date: 5/3/2014 2:01:00 AM
Hi Lily. Wow, what a cool write. I love the way you shaped your words and thoughts into such an entertaining poem. I'll be looking for more. Drop by, my friend :-) Mel
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/5/2014 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Mel for your kind words ;)
Date: 5/1/2014 10:31:00 AM
Hello Twinkle, What an enchanting and beautiful write, from start to finish! Thanks so much for sharing this poem with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/2/2014 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Deborah for your generous comment ;) Peace to you too!
Date: 5/1/2014 10:20:00 AM
A moonlit romance with an exquisite Twinkle... best wishes
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/2/2014 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Joseph for your kind words ;)
Date: 5/1/2014 8:17:00 AM
Lily, you have just penned an electrifying,tantalizing and enchanting beauty! Its creativity caresses the mind.
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/1/2014 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Ndaba for visiting and leaving your kind comment ;) much appreciated! Have a beautiful day!
Date: 5/1/2014 7:07:00 AM
Beautiful words and I love the layout, so smooth to read, very enjoyable. :)
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/1/2014 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Casarah for your kind words ;) Have a beautiful day!