Lily Twinkle Poet Free verse

Full Moon

blooming inside
your dancing lips trace moonlight in my heart
I feel your dreamy words 
creaming
caressing
sugaring
sweetening
------ my closed minds

Full Moon
........rising in the east
........lanterns and moon viewing
........and a cup of green tea

opening inside
your loving kindness reflected moonlight in my heart
I sense your poetic desire
seeking
strumming
gliding
gradually
------ into my mind

Full Moon
.......kissing the tatami
.......softly entering the residence
.......lighting upon a maiden's face and her samurai

tiptoeing inside
your gentle warrior heart shining moonbeam in my heart
I embrace your burning soul
melting
dissolving
enchanting
electrifying
------ this body of mine 

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Shadow Hamilton May 16, 2014 at 5:45 AM I love the moon great pen Lily congrats on win hugs Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:18 AM Thanks Shadow for your kind words ;)

Skat A May 15, 2014 at 10:04 AM Lily, Congratulations, on your sweet awesome poetry soup win. Love ~SKAT~ Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:19 AM Wow! Thanks SKAT for your encouragement ;) It was a pleasant surprise!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 15, 2014 at 8:40 AM Very wonderful verse Lily ! Congrats on great win ! Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:19 AM Thanks so much Dr Upma for the encouraging words ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta May 15, 2014 at 5:57 AM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Lily Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:20 AM Wow! Thanks Dr.Ram for reading and commenting ;)

Poet Destroyer A May 15, 2014 at 12:46 AM Lily,. Congratulations, thank you for supporting my any poem contest # 30... Take, and enjoy your day/night... LUV ~LINDA~ Lily Twinkle May 18, 2014 at 11:21 AM Thank you for the opportunity, Linda ;) Very kind of you!

Mel Merrill May 3, 2014 at 2:01 AM Hi Lily. Wow, what a cool write. I love the way you shaped your words and thoughts into such an entertaining poem. I'll be looking for more. Drop by, my friend :-) Mel Lily Twinkle May 5, 2014 at 7:43 AM Thank you Mel for your kind words ;)

Deborah Shiells May 1, 2014 at 10:31 AM Hello Twinkle, What an enchanting and beautiful write, from start to finish! Thanks so much for sharing this poem with us here. Peace, Deborah Lily Twinkle May 2, 2014 at 7:08 AM Thank you Deborah for your generous comment ;) Peace to you too!

Joseph May May 1, 2014 at 10:20 AM A moonlit romance with an exquisite Twinkle... best wishes Lily Twinkle May 2, 2014 at 7:07 AM Thank you Joseph for your kind words ;)

Ndaba Sibanda May 1, 2014 at 8:17 AM Lily, you have just penned an electrifying,tantalizing and enchanting beauty! Its creativity caresses the mind. Lily Twinkle May 1, 2014 at 8:51 AM Thank you Ndaba for visiting and leaving your kind comment ;) much appreciated! Have a beautiful day!

Casarah Nance May 1, 2014 at 7:07 AM Beautiful words and I love the layout, so smooth to read, very enjoyable. :) Lily Twinkle May 1, 2014 at 7:21 AM Thank you Casarah for your kind words ;) Have a beautiful day!