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Full Moon

blooming inside
your dancing lips trace moonlight in my heart
I feel your dreamy words 
creaming
caressing
sugaring
sweetening
------ my closed minds

Full Moon
........rising in the east
........lanterns and moon viewing
........and a cup of green tea

opening inside
your loving kindness reflected moonlight in my heart
I sense your poetic desire
seeking
strumming
gliding
gradually
------ into my mind

Full Moon
.......kissing the tatami
.......softly entering the residence
.......lighting upon a maiden's face and her samurai

tiptoeing inside
your gentle warrior heart shining moonbeam in my heart
I embrace your burning soul
melting
dissolving
enchanting
electrifying
------ this body of mine 

Copyright © Lily Twinkle | Year Posted 2014

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Shadow Hamilton Date: 5/16/2014 5:45:00 AM I love the moon great pen Lily congrats on win hugs Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/18/2014 11:18:00 AM Thanks Shadow for your kind words ;)

Skat A Date: 5/15/2014 10:04:00 AM Lily, Congratulations, on your sweet awesome poetry soup win. Love ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/18/2014 11:19:00 AM Wow! Thanks SKAT for your encouragement ;) It was a pleasant surprise!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/15/2014 8:40:00 AM Very wonderful verse Lily ! Congrats on great win ! Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/18/2014 11:19:00 AM Thanks so much Dr Upma for the encouraging words ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/15/2014 5:57:00 AM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Lily Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/18/2014 11:20:00 AM Wow! Thanks Dr.Ram for reading and commenting ;)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/15/2014 12:46:00 AM Lily,. Congratulations, thank you for supporting my any poem contest # 30... Take, and enjoy your day/night... LUV ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/18/2014 11:21:00 AM Thank you for the opportunity, Linda ;) Very kind of you!

Mel Merrill Date: 5/3/2014 2:01:00 AM Hi Lily. Wow, what a cool write. I love the way you shaped your words and thoughts into such an entertaining poem. I'll be looking for more. Drop by, my friend :-) Mel Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/5/2014 7:43:00 AM Thank you Mel for your kind words ;)

Deborah Shiells Date: 5/1/2014 10:31:00 AM Hello Twinkle, What an enchanting and beautiful write, from start to finish! Thanks so much for sharing this poem with us here. Peace, Deborah Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/2/2014 7:08:00 AM Thank you Deborah for your generous comment ;) Peace to you too!

Joseph May Date: 5/1/2014 10:20:00 AM A moonlit romance with an exquisite Twinkle... best wishes Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/2/2014 7:07:00 AM Thank you Joseph for your kind words ;)

Ndaba Sibanda Date: 5/1/2014 8:17:00 AM Lily, you have just penned an electrifying,tantalizing and enchanting beauty! Its creativity caresses the mind. Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/1/2014 8:51:00 AM Thank you Ndaba for visiting and leaving your kind comment ;) much appreciated! Have a beautiful day!

Casarah Nance Date: 5/1/2014 7:07:00 AM Beautiful words and I love the layout, so smooth to read, very enjoyable. :) Login to Reply Lily Twinkle Date: 5/1/2014 7:21:00 AM Thank you Casarah for your kind words ;) Have a beautiful day!