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Full Moon

FULL MOON It takes a full moon To witness those two lovers Caressing in sweet embrace. Chiquitita beats “There is no time for grieving” For the full moon is shining! Dragon fruits parade Their attractive red flowers Under the smiling moon. Bamboo bench witnessed Lover’s undying romance Lips locked under the full moon. For the night induced By the brightness of the moon They forgot themselves truly! Dalila Agtani 10/27/11 Entered in a contest sponsored by Russell Sivey Contest Name What Happens During A Full Moon?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2011 10:14:00 PM

wow, this is very unique and some interesting imagery, Dalila, I enjoyed it.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/3/2011 12:24:00 AM

This is superb, Dalila! A lover's moment under the full moon. I can easily see why Russell ranked it so high! Congrats on this win..Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/2/2011 12:23:00 PM

What a romantic sight to see beneath the full moon, Dalila. You could have entered this in the "erotica" contest as well. Excellent write! Congratulations on your win in Russell's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2011 9:53:00 AM

Congrats Dalila on second place win with this visual delight for the contest luv.. so sorry ..have been super busy with moving into new home and our food business is so busy this time of year until the new year begins.. appreciate your sweet comments on my poetry .. will keep in touch.. glad u are back again luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/2/2011 5:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Russell's "What Happens During A Full Moon" contest Dalila. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/2/2011 1:08:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Dalila

Eddie Cox

Date: 11/1/2011 1:06:00 AM

Great piece of work :) really enjoyed it! Good luck!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2011 12:04:00 AM

I sure envy you. Remind me where you are going to be tomorrow!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2011 10:48:00 PM

This is lovely, dalila. Nice and romantic. I hope you do well in the contest.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 10/28/2011 6:27:00 AM

* “I Love This Wonderful Poem My Dear Beautiful Dalila * I Read It Twice & Tis Sweet & I Love Love * Also In The Way That Your Brought to Life Certain Figures * And Have Always Loved The Moon * `The Night Induced * Lips Locked * Forgetting Themselves` & The World I Am Sure * Sooo Beautiful * Luv * Sarah.” *

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2011 1:23:00 AM

I really like how you did your entry!!