Dalila Agtani Poet Choka

Full Moon

FULL MOON

It takes a full moon
To witness those two lovers
Caressing in sweet embrace.

Chiquitita beats
“There is no time for grieving”
For the full moon is shining!

Dragon fruits parade
Their attractive red  flowers
Under the smiling moon.

Bamboo bench witnessed
Lover’s  undying romance
Lips locked under the full moon.

For the night induced 
By the brightness of the moon
They forgot themselves truly!


Dalila Agtani 
 10/27/11

Entered in a contest sponsored by
 Russell Sivey 
Contest Name What Happens During A Full Moon?

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Andrea Dietrich November 30, 2011 at 10:14 PM wow, this is very unique and some interesting imagery, Dalila, I enjoyed it.

Gwendolen Song November 3, 2011 at 12:24 AM This is superb, Dalila! A lover's moment under the full moon. I can easily see why Russell ranked it so high! Congrats on this win..Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire November 2, 2011 at 12:23 PM What a romantic sight to see beneath the full moon, Dalila. You could have entered this in the "erotica" contest as well. Excellent write! Congratulations on your win in Russell's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 2, 2011 at 9:53 AM Congrats Dalila on second place win with this visual delight for the contest luv.. so sorry ..have been super busy with moving into new home and our food business is so busy this time of year until the new year begins.. appreciate your sweet comments on my poetry .. will keep in touch.. glad u are back again luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown November 2, 2011 at 5:49 AM Congratulations on your win in Russell's "What Happens During A Full Moon" contest Dalila. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta November 2, 2011 at 1:08 AM Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Dalila

Eddie Cox November 1, 2011 at 1:06 AM Great piece of work :) really enjoyed it! Good luck!

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2011 at 12:04 AM I sure envy you. Remind me where you are going to be tomorrow!!

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2011 at 10:48 PM This is lovely, dalila. Nice and romantic. I hope you do well in the contest.

Sarah Seraphin October 28, 2011 at 6:27 AM * “I Love This Wonderful Poem My Dear Beautiful Dalila * I Read It Twice & Tis Sweet & I Love Love * Also In The Way That Your Brought to Life Certain Figures * And Have Always Loved The Moon * `The Night Induced * Lips Locked * Forgetting Themselves` & The World I Am Sure * Sooo Beautiful * Luv * Sarah.” *

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2011 at 1:23 AM I really like how you did your entry!!