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Full Moon

full moon shining down glowing in the black night sky controller of moods full face of the moon casting its light on the sea control ebb and flow shining moon above it watches us while we dream knows all our secrets

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James Fraser

Date: 3/27/2011 8:20:00 AM

Our Lunar satellite is a joy to write about Francine, fine Haiku series. ~*~ ps - I have never been to Amsterdam, but my mind has been everywhere ~*~ have a lovely Sunday....:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 6:58:00 PM

Very nice haiku "string" I do love a moon like a big pizza pie, That's AMORE!!!

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/25/2011 8:23:00 AM

Really like this one! Oh the full moon does have an effect on us (particularly women:) ... really relate to this one! Enjoyed the read. It was so much fun writing something for your contest based on that picture:) Looking forward to reading all the entries for your contest...imaginations will run rampant no doubt!

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/24/2011 8:55:00 PM

Awesome Francine, yes the moon sure is in control, sometimes, these are excellent haikus. with a touch of logic. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 9:11:00 AM

Juliet told Romeo not to pledge his love beneath the "inconstant moon," Francine. Your first verse reminded me of this. People are fickle with their feelings sometimes. Fishing is best when there's a full moon controling the tides and I like the throught of the moon watching over us while we dream, knowing our secrets. Excellent haiku series! Love, carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/22/2011 8:06:00 PM

Super Haikus Francine .. if for Rick's contest good luck... a spectacular view of the Moon and it's rare qualities luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/22/2011 12:27:00 PM

Super write on supermoon that controls of moods and ebb and tide, Francine

John Freeman

Date: 3/22/2011 8:54:00 AM

(2) "I HAVE BEEN HONORED “personally” INDEED OF GOD MY FATHER IN HAVING THE PRIVILEGE OF KNOWING YOU AND IN BEING SELECTED BY YOUR WISDOM OF UNCONDITIONAL LOVE!! AND THIS WAS BY BEING HONORED IN YOUR CONTESTS IN FIRST PLACE HONORS. BLESSING OF PARANORMAL LOVE BE POURED OUT UNTO YOU, MY SISTER Francine! One cannot achieve any higher honor, than to seek and choose their own source(God) above the flesh foible. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 3/22/2011 8:51:00 AM

A great series Haiku Francine. The great piece of art that you are yourself" is revealed, Francine, in your Haiku For when one discovers the beauty of nature hidden within it's own perfection! They have discover the beauty of God's body. Then one is apt to look past the foible flesh body to see the essence of Love's beauty hidden within the perfection of the Sacred heart of another! You've done this!!