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Full Moon

full moon--
hot breath of whispers
hangs on her ear

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Skat A

January 4, 2016 at 12:24 PM

after reading this, I think, you're a pro.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

November 23, 2010 at 10:14 PM

sent you soupmail (I am not a stalker haha)

C.C Bloomsfield

November 11, 2010 at 12:12 PM

Intriguing haiku,great work.

De R

November 6, 2010 at 11:07 AM

great imagery in this haiku, Phong! You sure captured a nice scene. Emilia

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

November 6, 2010 at 10:50 AM

ah a full moon... how fitting for you ;) kidding! soupmail

Debbie Guzzi

November 6, 2010 at 9:20 AM

I do understand prayer, meditation, poetry is very individual. After study (one can study ones whole life!) out of respect for those who have come before and excelled before you/me, you/we find our "way" On the site it is only being fair to be clear with the entrants what my/your way is as a judge of the contest, that's all I can do. Please review some of what I call my haiku and see if they come anywhere near to the "original intent or your understanding now of then?" Light & Love