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A shoot escapes biting this stars ray, E'er so oft rain splashes near its day, Lil glow often drawn in braids, Wind tussles ardent in trades, A petaled sheath loosens for display.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/25/2020 3:30:00 AM
This is quite beautiful, and I enjoyed it thoroughly ... nicely done, Sir William! Blessings, Friend! :o)
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Date: 1/25/2020 3:38:00 AM
Definitely pales in comparison to the masterful pieces that I have read of yours, time and again -- keep up with your usual stuff my friend, Aloha!~@wk

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