Full Circle diatonic mode
W–H–W–W–H–W–W.
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Sweet or melodious to the ear
seems too perfect for this world
strong sensory details
the poem's musicality
Sweet or melodious to the ear
authentic to your voice
Love and you
you in love
me and love
in love with you
so say's the evening
to what we prepare
the nights and days
the love we share
the time is right
love me like you mean it
it's alright
we have loved it
love
love
love
Love the days and nights
together
it's that perfect together
us forever
us forever
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