Fugue

I’m no one so I held him I kissed him I killed him now I have no place to go except the space between spaces the consolation of seeing the colors he stumbled over colors.

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Daver Austin

Date: 1/6/2014 2:23:00 PM

God, what a memory! I think I've been there, but I'm trying to figure out where there is. Love, Old daver

Jack Jordan
Date: 1/6/2014 6:10:00 PM

Sometime around 1968... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2014 12:30:00 AM

Jack... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. A nice way in starting the year:)- Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 1/6/2014 9:52:00 AM

Thanks, Linda. I have no idea who selects the featured poems, but it would be good, I think, if the author were contacted first... Jack And a great 2014 to you as well.