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Fueling Fires With Lies

can’t win improvise crocodile tears woeful cries hypocrites disguise endless feigning soul destroyed truth turns to ash neath stone eyes By David Kavanagh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/8/2021 3:52:00 AM
Those stone eyes are very telling and scary. Sara
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/8/2021 4:50:00 AM
Only if it’s a real crocodile, the pretend ones are toothless cheers David
Date: 2/7/2021 2:29:00 PM
Hi David, What a deep and well-written write. Lies are so common these days; they appear as truth. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/7/2021 2:49:00 PM
Heya Alexis, I love lies in a story or poem, that’s part of writing and intrigue, but when manipulated in the guise of political statements, to purposely fan hatred and egos, as you said they appear true, cheers David
Date: 2/7/2021 2:08:00 PM
Fantastic verse, David. Truth doesn't seem to matter anymore. Plenty of narrative that blows truth out of the water.. Great job Panagiota
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Date: 2/7/2021 2:16:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota, your so right, it doesn’t seem to matter, I love made up stories in poetry, but pushing it with a hidden agenda, no thanks, cheers David
Date: 2/7/2021 1:44:00 PM
Well written David :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 1:48:00 PM
Heya Heidi, that nearly rhymes, thank you so much cheers David

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