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losing best friends is tragic ~ lose one for taking a life, stigmatic By David Kavanagh

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/5/2022 4:08:00 AM

David, you've written an excellent monoku. In one single phrase, you conveyed a great deal. The things that ladies performed in order to execute their own abortions were absolutely horrendous.

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/5/2022 4:45:00 AM

Ain’t that the truth Lasaad, I’m not even pro-abortion, but I am all for letting the woman choose, rather than having them die whilst attempting botched homemade abortions, out of sheer desperation, cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2022 10:36:00 AM

Hi David, I echo what Bill and Tom said. Your lines are deep and thought-provoking. Exceptional one-liner. I saw your comment to Tom and I wasn't aware that the Supreme Court outlawed abortion once again. So Roe Vs Wade doesn't exist anymore? I am in total shock of this news. The things women did to perform their own abortions were horrifying-Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/4/2022 11:20:00 AM

A backwards step for women Alexis, seems to me they just don’t think women are intelligent enough to make this choice for themselves anymore, so now they choose for you, absolute madness imo, cheers David

Bill Baker

Date: 5/3/2022 8:11:00 AM

Excellent Monoku, David. You said a lot in that one line. Thanks for sharing through your poetry, Bill

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/3/2022 8:47:00 AM

Good to see you Bill, think I just about managed to get this message and my feelings across in a limited form, like I said to Tom below, there’s a contemporary twist in here as well, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/3/2022 5:56:00 AM

Powerful one David, I hope it is fictional. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/3/2022 6:04:00 AM

Afraid not Tom, wish it was, a long time ago now, but stays with you, on a different note I also am drawing parallels with the new leaked documents from the Supreme Court in the US, about abortion being outlawed once again, and women not having the right to choose, insane imo, cheers David