Carmen Castro Poet Rhyme

Frustrating Voices

I get so frustrated with the voices in my head 
They seem to tell stories when I'm ready for bed 
They sound so amazing I should write this all down 
But as soon as I locate a pen I don't hear a sound 
Tell me the story repeat it again 
I'll write it on paper and share with my friends 
I try to remember but to no avail 
Papers get crumbled because memory fails 
Frustration seeps in I almost give up 
The voices are asleep so I'm just out of luck 
But then I remember just one little line 
The rest I just wing it to make the poem rhyme

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Justcallme Britt June 10, 2012 at 10:59 AM same here, Carmen. VERY very fustrating. fav'd <3 Carmen Castro June 10, 2012 at 11:01 AM Yes funny how I never have a pen near... : )

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2012 at 10:47 AM A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Carmen. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol Carmen Castro June 8, 2012 at 1:26 PM Thanks for the sweet words Carol : )

Matthew Sample June 8, 2012 at 2:11 AM The lament of the lyrical soul, with a cashed out bong and an empty bowl...! I feel the pain, but like u we still roll!..Keep the good vibe and an accurate toll. -Sample Carmen Castro June 8, 2012 at 3:01 AM Wow your really good... Thanks for the advice