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Frustrated, First-Rate

~ Frustration, first-rate ~

 Plan-free poem penning produces
     enthusiastic 
        endorsement

 Carefully-crafted couplets
      ~ collapse

how i feelpoemsalliteration

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Caren Krutsinger

October 30, 2019 at 9:44 AM

Great aliteration my friend.

Gershon Wolf

October 30, 2019 at 1:15 PM

Thanks for noticing the alliteration, Caren. :-) gw

Swetha Vangaveti

October 29, 2019 at 6:20 AM

Absolutely true Gershon. I always wonder how greatly people write following Meters and other rules of writing!! I always think why will I not be able to write taking parameters into consideration. I always allow my mind to pour it's thoughts and emotions and the result is a free verse. Your poem just reflected what I always felt.

Gershon Wolf

October 29, 2019 at 11:42 AM

Thank you for sharing your insights with me, Swetha, and for the feedback on this little poem. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Hello There

October 28, 2019 at 9:32 PM

I've noticed that, too, Gershon... The most simple pieces I post and worry are not worthy of notice seem to get the most attention. It baffles me 8-) I enjoyed this piece of yours!

Gershon Wolf

October 29, 2019 at 11:38 AM

Yeah, you just never really know what people are going to like, I guess. Thanks, H.T. Smiles, Gershon