Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Dodoitsu

Fruits of War - Portmanteaus

FRUIT OF WAR - PORTMANTEAUS

Brusted gree skirt the terrain --
its fortress now smog of pains.
Sprolled brave emoticons flurst
floppled by remorse.

Alive, lovely floriage.
no mercy, at once loafted!
Finentual world ethics 
forgotten clang cries.

Blind men sinduced to power:
justice then a fadograph.
Bescraped kindness ,dusten traits,
birthing woes and death.

Precious breathing counts one, two. 
In and out wheezing some help
Oozing damage marks hatred
Peace start when war ends.

(c) Olive ELoisa
10:41pm
August 20, 2014

from the list: smog, emoticon

from research:
brusted - Brown Broken and Rusted
gree - any number of green trees
sprolled - sped and rolled
flurst - flew and burst
floppled - fell, flopped and toppled
floriage - flowers and foliage
loafted - floated and drifted
finentual - final and eventual
sinduce - sin and seduce
fadograph - fade photograph
bescrape - escaped and broke
dusten -dusty and beaten

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Maurice Yvonne September 4, 2014 at 10:16 AM i hate to say i told you so. congratulations on your win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 4, 2014 at 10:39 AM :) God bless you MAurice.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 4, 2014 at 6:34 AM Olive, congrats on the fine win Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 4, 2014 at 10:26 AM thanks :)

Paul Callus September 3, 2014 at 6:26 PM Well done Olive_eloi! I had missed reading this poem; luckily your merited win brings it to my attention. Congratulations. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 4, 2014 at 10:17 AM thanks much Sara.. :) I appreciate this.. :)God bless. :)

Sara Kendrick September 3, 2014 at 12:08 PM Astounding winner..Way to go..Congrats..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 25, 2015 at 5:47 PM thank you so much Sara.. :)!

Maurice Yvonne August 22, 2014 at 11:05 PM excellent. just a delight to read. i am a theatre director at heart. writing is so out of my range. hard to control words i drive my work by my passion. as a director though i so appreciate your talent. God Bless and go girl go! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 4, 2014 at 10:13 AM Thanks much Maurice.. :) I appreciate this.. :) GOd bless you too.. :)

Carrie Richards August 22, 2014 at 9:17 PM Oh wow....Debbie is going to love this one...you truly grab this bull by the horns!!Yippee for you!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 10:05 PM Thank you Carrie..:) I really appreciate this comment..:) knowing of how graceful are your words too this do encourage me more..:) I tried this as am curious with the words that is classified as PORTMANTEAUS..:) GBU thanks again..:)

Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 10:22 AM I'm not even going to attempt this contest - I only speak English and gibberish LOL Great work good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 4:29 AM I was curious with what are PORTMANTEAUS is I'm glad I tried it..:) somehow I have known some coined words which before I used..:) but I wasn't taw are that it's called that way ..:)