Fruitless

Right before my eyes
it has begun to wither.
The trust is rotten.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 30, 2014 at 10:39 AM
Puzzling. This could be Haiku or Senryu, depending on its meaning. I like the "fruitless idea. Love, daverI
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April 30, 2014 at 1:11 PM
interesting perspective I guess it could be. Thanks daver for pointing that out! ~Kira
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April 29, 2014 at 9:11 PM
Nothing like being deceived by trust. .That's one of several pet-peeves of mine..It surely makes an individual fruitless. .. love this Haiku of yours. Thank you for the kind visit and comment. :)
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April 30, 2014 at 1:11 PM
exactly! and no problem thanks for stopping by ~Kira
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