Fruit of Her Womb

Whom should I compare her to! I look around
I think a lot, but I find none
She is my god~  ~  ~ ~my small god
Worthy of praise without a pause
Each time I look at her
 and see her grayish hair,
"I am heavy with countless thoughts
that clog my breath"
As the day arrives like a crow in a cornfield
each person draws to his end.
This sadtruth makes me wail as a child.

She carried me in her womb for months
while some terminated theirs.
There were days she found it hard to sleep
when she had those false alarm labor cramps.
Took care of me from cradle till I grew up
and in those days she became a singer
and an acrobatic dancer
without a drum drummed for her.
With lullabies she sang through the night,
just to comfort me in till morning light.

There were times I fed on her
while her belly was empty as air.
There were days she bore the blame for my fault.
There were days she cried for me
and days she went without
just to have me wear something new,
and said, "You're my future, my need."
Her fruits has now begun to yield
but, her days seem to speed
I wish I have a catalytic spell
to morph her back into a young girl
so that I can take care of
her for as long as I want.
I wish I have the elixir of life to make her live
for days seem to be just a single night.

Only God is  unending;
But my love for her is a sea
that will never dry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Garg Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 6:12 AM
Delicate enough to move a heart and strong enough to motivate a mind in dedication...
Ogundare Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 6:39 AM
This is beautiful Afolabi, and your choice of words is superb.
A   Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:48 PM
deep write... LINDA
Makama Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Classic, intelligent, sublime and graceful. As usual, yet another excellent piece from you dear poet. Happy new year once again
D. Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 10:01 AM
what a lovely dedication. your mother seems amazing
Hunjeri Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 1:04 PM
wow Afolabi, a beautiful dedication to your mother. so deep and tenderly crafted. i felt it! def a 7
Sathasivam Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 6:35 AM
Excellent. Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 8:25 PM
Afolabi, for me this one of your best!! excellent piece!~Olive Eloisa
Lamoureux Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Beautiful tribute to your mom. Exceptional feeling you have captured with this Piece.
Nunez Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Any mother would be proud to receive this. Beautiful, sincere sentiments expressed here. S3L8 - Fruit, remove 's'. Good one, AM.
Gasun Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 2:33 AM
Oh wow... this is a very wonderful, lovely and a very touching dedication poem to one of the most important persons to us in this world, my very dear friend, AM. I'm Loving and enjoying this excellent mother's poem of yours so much from the beginning til end. I feel so much for you here my very dear friend. A 7+++ from me. Thank you, thank you so much for sharing. Also for your precious time stopping by. More blessings to you! love lots and big hug, Leonora
Boddie Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 3:38 PM
am, wow, you did your thing my brother....because she has influence unlike any other....you can find a new friend, a new job, a new child, a new Lover....but there is only one, you can never get another mother....Beautifully done my friend....
Muideen Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 4:18 PM
She is un-exchangeable
Muideen Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 4:16 PM
That is it my friend Eric she's unchangeable, I wish there is a spell of alchemy to morph her back into a young girl. My love for her rise each day I woke and the more I think the more it evokes. Thank you for the visit my friend.
Godwin Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 11:20 AM
So loving, touching and emotional! Your poem mirrors many of my own thoughts and feelings for my Moma. She is now 79 and slowly, gradually before my eyes, I am becoming the parent and she the child. Like your Mother, mine has always shown a generous heart and dedication to her children. I am touched and as sad as this 'phase' of life is, we are blessed they know who we are and they are healthy - (I pray your Mother is healthy). A very moving write ... CayCay ah, never, never, ever, dry
Muideen Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 4:00 PM
Thank you for shopping my friend CayCay your pleasant comment is appreciated. May you fill with unending bliss and your mom live a long life. Stay blessed my friend.
Dunn Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Dear Afolabi What a wonderful tribute to your mom, I'm sure she is pleased with it, awesome my friend love the devotional inspirational feeling it brings worth very touching, bravo, and thanks for your review of my sunshines daughter, I wrote it for my oldest daughter and I, take care cheri hope you have a great week, and weekend!
Muideen Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Thank you very much cherl your comment is much appreciated.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 7:55 PM
a truly beautifully painted tribute afolabi wishing you a blessed weekended
Muideen Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:40 PM
I appreciate your visit.
Tor Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 12:32 PM
Afolabi you honor your mother with such a loving write. Loved reading this my friend.
Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Thanks a lot.
Vaso Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:53 AM
What a very beautiful poem and dedication not only to your mother but to all mothers! Great poem!
Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Thank you.
Pinet Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:18 AM
You recall all the magic that surrounded your youth and recognize that your mother was the source and inspiration for that magic. Your words are like a bouquet of flowers that brighten the senses and pay tribute to the love that was your mother. You have stored all the best your mother gave to you in your heart so that you may dispense it to others and they too can be touched by the experience. Emile.
Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Your comment is appreciated Emile thanks a lot.
Lindley Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 9:47 AM
A truly wonderful poem my friend. A great tribute to your mother. It is so well written and greatly inspiring. A7 Adding this jewel to my fav list. Thanks..
Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Think you.
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Wonderful honor you bestowe on your mother..Not all young people praise their moms like this ..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara
Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Thanks for the uplifting and encouraging words. Stay blessed my friend SARA.
Sergi Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Hi Afolabi: I was really in awe of your tribute to your mother. I especially loved the line , " My love for her is like he sea that will never dry." Great Write!
Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Thank you Ralph for your lovely and uplifting comment.
Inman Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 6:45 AM
Afolabi, one of your best writes in my opinion. Very good. The subject is beautiful and touching. Well thought out and good word choices. The last two lines are excellent!
Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Thank you my friend
Duggan Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Hi Afolabi, what a beautiful tribute to your mother, if my sons or daughter wrote that about me I would be the proudest mother in the whole wide world, you deserve a seven ++++++ for that. take care........Vera
Muideen Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Thank you for dropping by.
Muideen Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 11:41 PM
The valuation of a mother is incomparable think you my friend for dropping by....stay blessed.
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:49 PM
wow, amazing emotions of admiration and love for your mother. THis is just wonderful!!
Muideen Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 1:50 PM
Thank you very much Andrea.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 7:17 AM
A monument of superb beauty and love for the one who brought you to life! No words can ever describe the magnitude of her devotion to your wellbeing, my friend, A.M. A seven!
Muideen Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Thank for dropping by sir your presence is appreciated.
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