Fruit Cake

my neophobia as always perched and ready against cherries, berries this stronghold of flavors wrapped by a heart that could block the sun an unassuming confection a final goodbye I've been too tiny to try did not give up on me

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 2/23/2022 9:49:00 PM

Just had to read this because my grandmother’s fruitcake was stolen from her car one Christmas Eve. Glad you finally tried fruitcake. What a fun poem!

Ricky Muse
Date: 3/12/2022 3:58:00 PM

Thank U Jennifer. One of the best things I ever put in my mouth ironically.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/9/2022 12:25:00 PM

A well-penned poem, Richard. I echo what Paul said, it's always relative, dislikes sometimes shepherd us to discover and implement something new. I wanted to thank you for reading and commenting on my poem: Past is Past. Nice to exchange thoughts with you.

Ricky Muse
Date: 2/21/2022 1:07:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. Be safe, be blessed.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2021 1:55:00 AM

Sometimes dislike can either put us off things, or else tempt us to explore something new (such as food with distinct flavours.) ~ Thank you for stopping by to read my poem to Carolyn. Regards // paul

Ricky Muse
Date: 8/25/2021 5:12:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Be safe, be blessed...............peace!