Mike Gentile Poet Free verse

Frozen Tears

A perfect day
Frigid, icy winds flurry
     A gray sky hangs low
Stillness abounds
Tedious, in quiet echo

A perfect day
To grieve, to miss you
     For apathetic cemeteries
A perfect day
To cry frozen tears

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Darlene De Beaulieu November 11, 2017 at 5:50 PM I hope you don;t cry frozen tears for too long. Have a nice evening my friend.xx-oo Mike Gentile November 12, 2017 at 6:14 AM Thanks Darlene xxoo

Line Gauthier November 11, 2017 at 10:43 AM So touching. Lovely poem, Mike. Mike Gentile November 11, 2017 at 12:58 PM Thank you Line!

Silent One November 11, 2017 at 8:43 AM A sad write Mike.. Frozen tears remain with us forever.. I hope you find a way to warm them so they disintegrate like they are meant to... Have a great weekend my friend.. Mike Gentile November 11, 2017 at 8:47 AM Thanks Silent One, have Fun !!

Heidi Sands November 11, 2017 at 7:43 AM I can just picture this, as you describe it, Mike. Well written and expressed. Happy Saturday :) Mike Gentile November 11, 2017 at 8:47 AM Thanks Heidi, Happy Saturday xxoo