Frozen Tears

Frozen ice shelf spans water Snow burnishes the ice-way Tears that once been sadly shed Now freeze in their place
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Lamoureux Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 12:47 PM
Hi Russell I have dedicated a poem to you. Thanks for inspiring me with this amazing poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 12:24 PM
I hope that your tears are so warm that you are able to melt all those sad frozen tears and grow a garden of beautiful flowers in the place of all that ice. Great Poem Russell
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 3:30 PM
I enjoyed the way you compared ice to frozen tears. REally nice, Russell.
Horne Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 3:03 PM
love this clever write, my friend. I see you have another contest - will have to check it out : )
Falotico Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Deep piece that brings images throughout. Thank you for taking the time to read me. Michael
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace