Frozen Tears

A world viewed through cold eyes creates
frozen tears & hardened emotions
Going through the motions only solidifies
the pain as salty feelings
cut like ice sickles impaling warm veins
These feelings bleed out into the 
streets of our minds that were constructed
upon old structures & paradigms in vain
At times I feign ignorance of these
false foundations because ignorance
is bliss
knowing burying my head in the 
sand could be hit or miss
No one is at home in this batters box
& it would be remiss of me to not
mention this paradox
The glass half empty view if full
of contradictions no one wants
to see through
& in a world viewed through cold eyes
tears are frozen before they've
had a chance to cry
Dry ice falls & shatters leaving
you to pick up the pieces
as if gathering your emotions
isn't hard enough in this season
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 4:28 PM
Such a profound, powerful write Jasen my poetic friend. So well written and expressed with many great lines. Love the title too. Your strong opening line pulls the reader in immediately. Also, ‘ tears are frozen before they’ve had a chance to cry’ really stood out for me. Very deep and meaningful. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings and smiles to you :):)
Ridley Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 11:44 PM
Thank you Christina I'm glad you appreciate it!! Always good to hear from you. Blessings
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