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Frozen Solid

Frigid weather with gritty graupels welcome winter.
	Rivulets of raucous rain freeze without cease or halt.
	Overly willful waterfalls splatter and splinter.
	Zealous spirits scatter shards with turbulent thrust fault 
	Emerging brush tips turn tourmaline in the hinter.
	Neither dream nor prayer can cease the arctic assault.

	Soon all within sight is frozen as solid as steel.
	Only constant currents course beneath the sea’s surface.
	Life lies limpid and sleeps till spring thaw offers repeal. 
	Inhospitable season’s side effects soon lose face.
	Days of sizzling sunshine offer auspicious appeal.
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Ibeh Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Nicely done Acrostic poem, Linda:-) Love it! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
Fowler Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 8:54 AM
Many thanks for my placement in your contest Edward! I appreciate it. :) Linda
Romios Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 9:48 AM
I see a win for you in this! Great vocabulary used…..and an applicable image. Pangie.
Fowler Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Many thanks friend Pangie. I appreciate your positive comments. hugs, :)
Bueckert Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 7:00 AM
This is wonderful Linda, I too love the coursing currents underneath, great imagery. It is -30 C here today (before the wind chill) so this feels incredibly timely as well haha! Good luck to you in the contest!
Fowler Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Hello Hat. So glad you stopped by today. Brrr! It is not so cold here in East Texas today, 50s F. :) Thank you for the kind comments. Stay warm! :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:17 AM
A well written acrostic Linda, I love the beauty of winter. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Winter is one of my favorites - the beauty, especially in nature, is humbling. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I hope all is well with you. :)
Bose Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Linda, I at first noticed all your wonderful alliteration and precise vocabulary, then the complete picture really struck me ... you've succeeded in giving us a frigid picture. Plus, I learned "graupel" today! Very nice, thank you. Dave
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:30 AM
Hi David! I'm heartened by your thoughtful comments. Thanks for visiting and reading and commenting. You're welcome for any pleasure my work may give you LOL :)
Kyser Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:06 AM
Very nice, Linda - I like this! I love how there's always water moving underneath the ice, a whole world we can't see sometimes.
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Many thanks for the kind words Jeff. Yes, I too marvel at Nature's quirky humor. :)
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