Frozen Solid

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We once roamed free across space as living light, one with oneness, blissful and feeling complete but as a dare chose to know darkness of night, feeling contrast of joy and pain, cold and heat, with memory erased, to be crouched in fright, thus ensouled form, far removed from love's bliss beat. Frozen solid, we've forgotten who we are, so we now stare at yonder moon from afar. 15-November-2022 Pick-A-Title, Vol 33 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/15/2022 7:24:00 AM

Awesome ottava rima with vivid imagery, Seeker:-) Thanks for introducing me to this unique form. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/15/2022 12:16:00 PM

Hi Seeker! Now I have imAgine nearly these things at times, so real for me. I cannot stand feeling cold! In this poem, tho, it was the ball. Of light and the distance that inc loved me, hugs, sally

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/15/2022 4:56:00 PM

Yes, the light is within. Google spiritual heart (Santosh Sachdeva, Ramana Maharishi)

Sand Blown

Date: 11/15/2022 11:11:00 AM

....you made my day with that photo.... far out man.....did you take it?....stan

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/15/2022 4:51:00 PM

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