Frozen Silence

frost grips fallow ground
lancet winds slice solitude -
frozen silence cracks

December 16, 2019
Syllable count : 5/7/5
Checked on howmanysyllables.com 
Contest : Writing Challenge-Winter Haiku Or Senryu
Sponsor : Dear Heart-Wiishkobi Ode
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Roper Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 6:53 PM
Congratulations on your very descriptive win, Subimal! Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 5:37 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your lovely haiku ~
Iversen  Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Excellent, congrats-Peter
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December 25, 2019 at 2:30 PM
- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Subimal :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 5:32 PM
wow, this is really really good!!! Congrats on the win.
Strand Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:55 AM
Subimal,enigma everywhere.
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 5:13 PM
amazing imagery and very haiku!!! Wish I'd done mine as well.
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