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Frozen side of the sun

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For Pick-A-Title, Vol 51 - ' Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 12 May 2025
No one speaks of the other face where the sun turns away from its own fire. There, light arrives as rumor, Penumbra drapes the craters in half-truths shadows with silver edges, ghosts of warmth that never touch. The umbra is deeper than silence. It is violet sorrow frozen in motion, a sanctuary built of charred frost. Even the wind moves carefully here, tracing broken helixes in gold-ash air. And yet in that hush, in that glacial hush something blooms. A flicker, A rebellion in cobalt and fireglass. The frozen side of the sun dreams not of warmth~ but of colour.

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Date: 5/18/2025 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Frozen side of the sun" write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day with your win................
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