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Frozen Sea

A frozen sea cracks

Undulations of cold ice

A whip strike resounds

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Probir Gupta

February 3, 2017 at 5:49 AM

Joyous perceptions ... just seventeen syllables ... unbelievable ...

John Herlihy

February 3, 2017 at 7:00 AM

Thanks very much, Probir. I like the challenge of the haiku. JH

Chuck Melugin

February 3, 2017 at 2:58 AM

John, you must be a painter, 'cause you have created three lines of picturesque poetry in surround sound! My best to you, chuck

John Herlihy

February 3, 2017 at 3:07 AM

I can't trace a stick drawing. Perhaps that is why I try to splash the poems with the paint of words. Thanks, Chuck. JH

Darren White

February 3, 2017 at 2:51 AM

THIS! I can hear it happen.....

John Herlihy

February 3, 2017 at 3:06 AM

Yes, it is a striking sound. I heard this once on the frozen canals of St. Petersburg (Russia). JH

White Wolf

February 3, 2017 at 2:18 AM

Great choice of words in this haiku, John! Again, excellent mate!

John Herlihy

February 3, 2017 at 2:35 AM

Thanks. Some don't work; but it's great when they do seem to work. JH

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