Frozen Moments

How beautiful you looked today
I saw you sitting there
And though your back was turned to me
I really didn't care

As long as I could see you
That was good enough for me
A moment in your presence
My heart and mind agree

Makes all the difference in the world 
I don't think you know
How much that I adore you 
And how you make me glow

If I can freeze those moments
Then see can't turn to saw
I'd store them in a cooler
Just so they'd never thaw
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Meadows Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 12:04 AM
A beautiful poem. Well written.
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October 2, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Thank you
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